I hope you update this soon . Plz don't take long

Uugghh they are too cuuuute ! I kind of like how you have given gokus character more depth than him just being always super nice to her . The way she was scared lol was so adorable

One more thing . As it was goku who found ox for vegeta so he is also kind of responsible for her fathers death . Right ? I hope you use this thing to kind of complicate tgeir relation ship even more hehehe

Ohh in the previous version it was just him sitting beside her but now he layed ooooohhhh . Poor her nobody can handle him ! Loving this development between them . And i am liking the more forward approach they have in this version .

Oh and him trying to get away from the waitress was funny haha

Really loved this chapter . And i actually really like the minor changes . Like how we get to know more of his thoughts . And told not to order food etc it makes it more real . Really loving it ! I just hope in this version she isn't raped ! Plz change that ! Yes have her go through a trauma but not that .

Love the story! It’s great! Will be waiting for next chapter.

Ohh myyy soo excited for this one ! Even tho i have read it so many times i have it all memorized !

Thank you for updating again! Will be waiting for the next chapter!

This is so good! Love all the twists!

OMG I love this story. Back when it was known as In your hands and now this. Thank you for wanting to rewrite this. It was amazing then and it’s definitely amazing now even by this first (2nd) chapter.

Ansiosa por leer esta historia

so beautiful! my heart just exploded with all these sweet feels overload! Great writing for my otp! looking forward for more! ;w;

did this story end? and there will be a sequel? I hope you include their wedding and some romance between Goku and Chi-Chi too :)

Love this story and in a huge Goku/Chichi fan. This story was intriguing. Please update soon. I really can't wait to see what Goku and Chichi do next to find Bulma and with their own relation.