Reviews for Training |
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![]() ![]() Awwwww this story was so adorable and I’m sad it’s over, Yasuchika x Haruhi is hard to find! I enjoyed reading the story very much and you did a great job! I hope to read more from you in the future. (Ik this story is old but on the off chance you read this I wanted to say it.) Much love 3 -Kimi C. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She just took on FIVE FIGHTERS on her OWN! And she held her own long enough for backup to arrive! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really cute. I do enjoy it when a fanfic comes along where Haruhi is NOT paired with a member of the host club. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you please write another story with this pairing? There's not much out there for this and I really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() Omg this is so good! I love it so far please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting story. great work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story! i Really want to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I'm not trying too be mean but you put Tuesday instead of Friday. I wish your story was part of the manga as it about time Haruhi followed up on doing something about her unable to really fight Back. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! This was a great story/chapter! Although I kinda wanted to know how Haruhi and Yaschika's first date would go. I really enjoyed this! P.s. I had this idea if a hidden picture auction. Haruhi having pictures of Kyoya and Kyoya having pictures of Haruhi. The two of them going back and forth. The auction picture war between two demon lords! I really got off topic. But thanks for writing this! Ja ne! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are a lot of spelling mistakes but this isn't too bad. I am curious to keep reading. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that was a sweet ending. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a good story |
![]() ![]() .AWESOME! Thank you for writing it and putting it out there! And for sticking with it and not letting it go unfinished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome absolutely loved it well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. As I was reading this chapter I thought to myself, "This has a nice closing feel to it." Congrats on finishing your first fanfic :) |