Has potential, lots of it in fact, POTENTIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL, I tell you! ;)
-Monkey Elder

Update update update, please.

Is he like Noctis?

Wish you would update more

You are not dead, right ?

he seemed more like gilgemesh from fate/stay but sounds good

it's fine if you portray Naruto different from the one-shot but can you keep him on the dark side a bit anyway i got an idea for a one-shot Madara is the evil master mind in the Canon right? how about when the four Kage's along with the Emo joined with the alliance the real evil master mind appear and his Rikudou Sennin but his also Uzumaki Naruto lets call him R-Naruto with EMS and Rinnegan combined and they look like Juubi's eyes after a shocking Revelation and a few fight R-Naruto defeated them all like a child's play and extracted Kurama from Uzumaki Naruto of the present lets call him P-Naruto and sends him to the past along with R-Naruto's memories and after sending P-Naruto to the past he called Kushina and the truth R-Naruto made contact with Kushina when she was being kidnapped by Kumo and told Kushina about the betrayal of Konoha to Uzu so Kushina went to R-Naruto and cut Kushina's soul in half creating two person with the same soul and the same body it's not a clone the half the went with R-Naruto lets call her R-Kushina the two became lovers and they made the other half kushina lets call her P-Kushina is being kidnapped by Kumo btw the Kumo ninja are under R-Naruto's Genjutsu and they erased P-Kushina's memory of R-Naruto and R-Kushina and P-Kushina become lovers with Minato and when P-Kushina's soul leave the seal the shikki fuin was it and P-Kushina's soul come back with R-Kushina and the two fought the shinobi alliance and killed them all well you can add the details heheh anyway hope you post your new fic soon

One thing that I know is that it will be interesting. From the way it looks seems like Naruto will have no chakra, but will have magic. That could be a product of Minato attempting to kill Naruto.

Do what you must, all i want is see minato suffer and see how naruto steal kushina from him

So I take it that you gave Naruto the Gate of Babylon for this story? I hope to see this take form.

This one-shot wasn't well written because you haven't established how this all came to be, so could you please not go back here and continue with your better works, like The King of Darkness or the Trancendent Ashikabi.

i'm been thinking why would anyone in this site like minato? if i'm in minato's case i'll never sacrifice my own child for the sake of the village even if they hate me and for kushina i kinda like her though agreeing with minato is another big no from me i wish she adapt the motto of the uzumaki clan fics - family above all others be damn - and if you ask me she could survive in the canon if she stayed still or didn't catch kuramas claw and wait for minato to sacrifice himself. i always like fics where minato is killed by naruto and for me minato is not the greatest seal master he's just one-trick pony just take he's hiraishin and he's nothing and if he's the greatest seal master par or superior to uzumaki mito and mito sealed kurama without dying he should have few original seal that can seal a bijuu right? and kushina told him the she's a Jinchuuriki and female Jinchuuriki's seal weaken upon childbirth that should be common if not kushina would have been told by mito and if you ask me minato is only high-A rank or very-low-S rank shinobi sory for the rant btw nice onshot fic

That was a pretty nice one-shot, can't wait to see the official story.

It's good. You should expand on this.

great story (well even if its short) naruto with noctis ability with blades and you know what ,noctis ability really reminds of shirous unlimited blade works so I get that FF versus 13 is the is the inspiration of fate stay at night, so any hope you update more of your other stories dude