You know, instead of having them try and suss out Kyoko's cycle, maybe just have her on birth control.

Thank you so much for a wonderful story. It's sad that Sho had to go thru so much to finally understand but sometimes that's what it takes . Thanks again.

Love this story. Wished there were more then 7 chapters. Love how they all keep messing with Sho, but he's too thick skilled to get it. Lol. Great job, thank you.

It's spelled "Kuu" NOT "Koo". Seriously Sho seriously, crashing their wedding.

Great story overall. You wrote Kyoko and Kuon perfectly

Damn Kyoko, you go girl. YAAAAAAY, They both confessed, so CUUUUUTE!

Cute, they went to the amusement park together.

Oh my gosh, Kyoko didn't realize... so innocent. Well they handle that well

Damn, so in sync.

IT IS MORI SENPAI! WTH

Morinozuka Takashi?! IM SURPRISED! MORI-SENPAI!

Awesome chapter and great work! I love it! Love the part where you put Sho in a mental hospital!

MORI-SENPAI!
Loving it!

Super nice fic! I really have a nice time reading it! Thank you!

So, I'm finally done reading this and can now make a proper review. Haha. Sorry about the first one I left.

First off, thank you for writing this story. I love how you punished Shou. He deserves this and more. But I also liked how you somehow redeemed him in the end. Redeemed might be too strong though, but yeah, I liked how he matured a bit to be able to send that card. I would have preferred that he stayed in the mental hospital forever though. Hahaha.

Secondly, the research you had put through in this work with laws and such is also amazing. Makes the story more realistic so cheers to you!

I think Ren may be a bit OOC though, but that's just me cause I personally think Ren is more closed off with his thoughts, more restricted, and it's been a long time since I reread SB so I might be thinking of his personality at the start of the series.

The story is cohesive and enjoyable. Didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes, too. So, kudos to you! :)

I'm not supposed to post a review yet because I haven't finished reading your story but I saw "Calculated in Death" in your A/N, and would like to ask if you are maybe a JD Robb fan, and say hello too. Haha.