What the hell is this? I usually try to be encouraging and helpful with reviews, but this is a joke. You have written yourself a story that is utter shit. Obviously, you don't care about what readers think whatsoever. To be honest, I have no clue what happened, and the lack of detail makes me wonder how high
you were when you wrote this. Obviously, very high. Your grammar is something that I don't even want to talk about, but the most irritating thing about this so-called 'story' is that you script wrote it, meaning you wrote as if you were one of the most miserable play-writes of all time. People only write like this if they have no clue how to utilize proper sentence structure, characterization, and grammar. On a scale of one to ten, this gets a .01, accounting for the infinitesimal amount of effort you put into this. I suggest you sober up, delete this crap, and rewrite this into a proper story.