LOVED the ending. That's all I can see.

HAHAHAHAHAHAH OW HAHAHAH OW OW HAHAHAHA! OMG MY SIDES HURT SO MUCH FROM LAUGHING! XDXDXDXDXDXD

OMGSH! I have not laffed so hard in a very long time! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Hilarious beyond belief!

"Buffy disappeared over the crest of the hill and set off at a dead run."

The mental imagery is killing me... seriously, my jaw and ribs hurt so bad right now...

"Xander batted his lashes." A line that should never appear in any story except a parody. I laughed myself sick reading this one.

:-)

double:-)

_giggle_

great!

Heh, I wasn't gonna review (funny, btw - slash addict, over here) but then I reread the title, got it and burst out laughing so, well done!

Special.

that was soooo sapy and sweet that i a long time

xan and spike fan feel like i need a toothbrush!

Ja-ne!

~Ash-chan~

This is a great story, and I'm going to be in touch with you soon via e-mail, about possibly archiving it.

Keep up the good work!

That...was...a riot. Excellant.

OMG Kes, I was laughing so hard that my daughter scoffed from the other room. :0)

I wanted to quote some of my favorite lines, but I couldn't decide...there's too many. Buffy visciously tugging on the chain everytime Xander and Spike kissed was great, and just the thought of the Buffy dragging them made me BWAH.

Okay, I have to quote: 'here was a terrible silence. “Xander,” said Anya, moving to loom over him, “have you become engaged to someone WHO ISN’T ME?”'

HAHA! A terrible silence! *laughs some more*

Oh, and Giles collapsed on the floor, clutching at his cracked teapot...omg...too funny.

'Gles remained bowed over his teapot lid, wrapped in his own private sorrow.'

Poor Giles.

You've written another hill-air-ree-us story Kes, I want more. More, I tells ya.

That was freaking hilarious! I loved it. It was so mushy though with Xander and Spike that I thought I would gag. I loved the scrubbing my hand comment by Xander too! That was classic! It was awesome!

Hehehe, this story is pretty funny. It would have been hilarious on the show :)