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LoveInTheBattleField chapter 3 . 6/22/2014 Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. This story was nice What Makes A Dad God took the strength of a mountain, The majesty of a tree, The warmth of a summer run, The calm of a quiet sea, The generous soul of nature, The comforting arm of night, The wisdom of the ages, The power of the eagle's flight, The joy of a morning in spring, The faith of a mustard seed, The patience of eternity, The depth of a family need, Then God combined these qualities, When there was nothing more to add, He knew His masterpiece was complete, And so, He called it...Dad. Happy Father's Day! |
I'm A Cuckoo chapter 3 . 7/1/2013 Wow! This was such a pleasure to read, I really enjoyed the mix of missing moments and being able to see the thoughts of both characters during the videos. I really liked the lunch time scene in Darcy's room, it was really nice to see how their relationship changes and moves forward. I discovered this by chance but you've convinced me that I need to read more stories you've written. Cuckoo x |
waitingforjudgement chapter 3 . 6/17/2013 Whoa, whoa, whoa. Excuse me?! What's with the 'la fin' and the 'complete' tag up there. No, no, no, no, no! This cannot be the ending! I am enjoying this far to much for you to finish it here! PLEASEEEEEEE give us some more! PLEASEEE! |
Bellethiel Lindariel chapter 3 . 5/1/2013 That was brilliant, I loved your use of repetition with the likening of how he felt to remembering the lyrics of a song. Really well written and your dialogue neatly captured how they spoke. |
msbookworm93 chapter 3 . 4/13/2013 That was so good! Great song choice for them up to that point! |
Sandi chapter 3 . 3/1/2013 I just wanted you to know that you are a great writer. :) I read this whole story with the song "So Close" playing on repeat in the background, up until the end, and as I read the last line, the last line of the song came on. I was in tears at the thought of how similar it is. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to seeing more of your work soon! |
EmlynMara chapter 3 . 2/25/2013 Oh, so sad of an ending. Lovely job of letting us in to Darcy's mind from the very beginning to the end. So close. |
millernumber1 chapter 3 . 2/25/2013 Really beautiful. Love Darcy's perspective, and how you weave all the moments in together. Well done! |
Me chapter 3 . 2/23/2013 that was lovely, really really great. |
GoldenPheasant chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 i adore you for incorporating Les Mis and that particular episode of friends into this already fabulous story |
justlovefanfiction2901 chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 Good job! Loved it lots. 3 |
Kimberly-A chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 Wow. This is the best fic I've read in a very long time: so touching, so funny, so in-character, so smoothly structured (the occasional quick jumps, in particular, were great and very appropriate for the source matter). Your writing inspires so many varied emotions that I just love this. I'm sure I will read it many times. |
BlueNynaeve chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 God, that was tragic! But oh, so painfully good. |
hisdarkdesire chapter 3 . 2/20/2013 WHERE'S THE REST?! |
ConstanceBoniful chapter 3 . 2/20/2013 Great story. Just so you know, the French equivalent to "The End" is just "Fin". |