Story was really good too.

a great story a shame its never been finished

Honestly, I wish you updated this story. Because believe it or not I've been reading it since chapter five and I've honestly had a blast reading it l. I know you'll probably never read this but I don't care. You've got my full love and support for this story, so kudos to you!

I know it's probably cancelled, but I can't help but re-read this story every so often because of its fresh take on Bioshock stories. If you have given up on this story for whatever reason, just know that you did an awesome job and it was fun while it lasted. I'll still come back and re-read this though XD

This was quite good.

Have you've been busy lately friend? There's a noticeably large gap between updates. Just curious and best of luck

Shall there ever be another?

I'm rereading the series again because I never got caught up. I love your work especially this one. Thank you so much for writing this. I had always wondered what happened to the little boys who got kidnapped. I look forward to reading more of your work.

yeah a new chapter, i love this story. keep up the good work.

Yay, you're still posting! I really love this story, so please continue it!

Poor guy

Great chapter. It's been a while since I have read this, and I still love it.

This is really good. I can't wait for a update.

broken brian requests

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I like u and I like big brothes NOW MAKE MORE STORY