Perfect match to the Fic that inspired you.
Very well done!

"...at least ten minutes to get threw..." try 'through' unfortunate English spelling quirthe other one indicates an object in the air.
contacy if you wish..

I really like the story though . actually I like the whole series you've written ,

awesome :)

Yay

Lol! This was nice! I loved. Beamirangs genesis as well.

Awesome Awesome Awesome story.

I'm sure he put himself under some kind of alergy ... Jim is crazy like that... ;) congratulations, nice story.

This was great! Nice exploration of poor McCoy's very inconvenient phobia (poor Bonsey!). Could totally see Kirk supporting him like this and selflessly giving himself anaphylactic shock to help a mate out. Also, I like that its kinda fanfic Inception you got going on here (fanfic of a fanfic authors work, who btw is awesome too). Would like to see a reactions chapter where Bones gets all mother hen about Jimmy's stunt :)

Yes I loved this little tidbit. Thanks for expanding on it.

Loved it. I'm glad someone wrote it. It's a great backstory for a wonderful story.

This was fantastic to read. I enjoyed the style, the humor, and the friendship and how well you wrote the two. Thank you for writing this.

Yay, that was interesting.
Admire your writing style. :)

This was wonderful and exactly how I imagined it!

Poor Bones - he really needs a week where Jim doesn't nearly die on him. He's going to go gray so young!

I'm really thrilled you wrote this and I am so sorry I didn't get back to you earlier. I hope you don't mind me linking to the story on my profile.

All the best,

B x

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this story is amazing, so glad you remembered that missing scene from Genesis :))