| Reviews for Damn Boggarts! Always muddling things up! |
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M. H chapter 1 . 7/21 Love it. |
HoneyBear84 chapter 1 . 10/31/2018 Aw to be a on the wall when Dummbles and Voldie finds out lol |
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 1 . 10/8/2017 Hm, interesting |
Thorilian chapter 1 . 4/21/2016 Nice, lol |
IchigoPudding chapter 1 . 3/11/2016 Super cute X |
countrylovinfangirl chapter 1 . 11/24/2014 amazing! |
Gleas chapter 1 . 3/5/2014 hahaha that was a fun read! |
KwBw21 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013 Loved it! I could imagine Harry basicly saying f**k you to those who didnt approve of his and Severus' love. Excellent job |
Sperenza chapter 1 . 4/24/2013 That was good. |
a fan chapter 1 . 4/11/2013 GIGGLE |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2013 It seemed like it would be interesting but the beginning just killed the story. Sometimes you're allowed to let your reader go with it, you don't have to explain every tiny detail, like 'yeah.. he was super powerful... so dumbledore was fooled... and... he doesn't like dumbledore any more because... Severus told him all about being manipulated...' You couldn't use a bit more of imagination? At the beginning you have to hook your reader, not make them roll their eyes and dread carrying on. |
Lady Gaidin chapter 1 . 2/23/2013 A little rushed, but not bad |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2013 What's with this short story ? Any way, I like your cute pic so for that I give you: Five Bronze Stars if you copyed but if you drew it I give you: One Golden Star. Hope you keep at it ! The Crimson Mage. |
Phoenix5 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013 Hi, it's not that I don't like this story, because I didn't read it. Can you at least break it in paragraphs? Because it is not very legible the way itis. It would be greatbecause, I really want to read it, but it mafe my eyes ache. I hope to read it soonand give you a real review about it. Phoenix5 |
arisflame chapter 1 . 2/19/2013 hehe- this does not seem finished. Continue... please? |