Wow...that ending made me tear up a little.

Why oh why couldn't Sephiroth escape Jenova? Love finally came his way and she had been forced to kill him. I'm crying as I type this because it moved me so much. I had hoped they would have settled down and work on their relationship, totally crushed.

I know this fic's on hiatus but I'm glad to have read what's here. If you decide to complete it, I'll be happy to see where it goes.

I do like the way the tensions between them are rising. Good for Aeris, not letting him run from his actions. The man must be desperate thought. The changes come so suddenly.

Sephiroth is so menacing and strange.

This is really good. I hope you continue.

I'm guessing he's not dead. Just out cold.

Will Cloud take her away?

Glad to see that you ARE still doing this flic, keep up the good work!

That was a weird chapter.

He's gonna go coo-coo again. I sense it right away! D:

Yo, I've been reading through this and I think it's really good!

You should really continue this!

so they became lovers... Not sure aerith would jump into bed so quickly with him.

Randomly happened upon your story while looking for Aerith/Sephiroth stories here and I absolutely love what you have so far! You've got me hooked and I can't wait to see the direction this story takes. Looking forward to more updates! ]

You're making feel really bad for Sephiroth. ;-;
This was a really good chapter. You've just proven that a story doesn't have to be long to actually be well written.

So what happened to cloud did she leave him at the cottage?