I'm a bit disappointed. Severus is too much ooc and Siriusis too forceful and maje me think of a bully

I'm really enjoying this story, but it hasn't been updated in years and I am wondering if this has been dropped?

i love the story and i cant wait to hear what you hwve to say next. this is probably the other only one story thats good with serverus in it OMG please tell me you know any other story where severus is with james/remus/sirius/regulus and heaven forbid not wormtail just eww ok well lovely story and thank you for posting it here for us to read. ;)

Go die

You ugly, dirty asshole!

Dirty bitch...

So interesting story!

keep going! good!

luv it!

your story, dear, is totally how i would pictured their relationships would be. i love how you make severus becomes sub but still have his backbone when it comes to something. this story is my totally daydreaming how their stories should be. good job !

hahahahahaha...so harry is da dominate mate of draco..while severus is the submissive to sirius..hahahaha...dis would b interesting since the both pairs of the god-son/god-father are in the same roles...hahahahaha

I like your fic, i like it a lot! Severus being submissive, even against himself... i just can't think about him being dominant, you know, i'm also the kind of person who thinks he deserves somebody to look after and take care of him, someone to love him, and this Sirius is makking a great job so far n.n

Update soon! and take care!

maw! n.n

PS. Sorry for my english u.u

Maybe you need to read more? I can get the gist of what you're saying, but the tenses of your words don't make sense. I can accept problems with dialogue, but you really need to work on coherence before you post anything to a public forum.

Like it !

awesome chapter love Sirius reaction to Harry and Draco