| Reviews for A Day in Manhattan |
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   WyldClaw chapter 1 . 4/16/2013 This is a fabulous start! |
| swanfire chapter 1 . 3/13/2013 Does anyone else notice how creepily alike Henry and Neal look when they do that thing where they push out their lips in thought? Cause I have, and I'm starting to think they chose a really gret choice for Henry's dad. Also, young and old snow cry EXACTLY alike. Almost creepier than Henry and Neal. Good story by the way. :) |
| Bookworm275 chapter 3 . 3/1/2013 Great story! I can't wait for the sequel. |
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 3 . 2/24/2013 This is very well written and I can't wait to read the sequel! :) |
| Kou Shun'u chapter 3 . 2/24/2013 oooh very enjoyable. i liked gold watching them the best. |
| SeddieLUV chapter 3 . 2/23/2013 Really hope you continue this! |
| SeddieLUV chapter 2 . 2/23/2013 Oh, the Swanfire feels...it's too much! |
| SeddieLUV chapter 1 . 2/23/2013 Loving this so far! |
| swancharmings chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 I LOVE THIS! All the Emma/Henry/Neal feels! And the Bae and Rumple angst breaks my heart. Awesome fic! :) |
| cflat chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 Really great story. I liked that Emma, Henry, and Neal spent the day doing tourist stuff in Manhattan. I liked that they went into the Disney store and that Henry got counterpart dolls for people he knows. You didn't mention, though, did he get Regina a counterpart doll? Reading this story made me think that it would be really great if you did a Neal POV of the episode Manhattan. |
| unbrokensaviorwithperfecthair chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 Please update soon! |
| HarrylovesGinny09 chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 Great chapter |
| Reader1981 chapter 2 . 2/21/2013 Doing good at getting both points of view. |
| Tinkerbell90 chapter 3 . 2/21/2013 Really great chapter. I like the family dynamic between Henry, Emma and Neal. Its cute and I really hope Emma and Neal get together again, because lets face it they're perfect for each other. The way you write Henry is just so cute and Neal's dilemma feels real. I guess that will happen on the show as well. If he stays in New York, he can't see Henry enough and if he moves to Storybrooke he has to deal with Rumple 24/7. And I'm kinda curious what you choose as Neal's job to be honest. The confrontation between Rumple and Neal/Bae whatever felt very real as well. I think you have a talent to get the characters just right. |
| Ali Rose chapter 3 . 2/20/2013 Thank you, thank you, thank you! I was hoping to find a beautiful, creative story on here after watching "Manhattan". Very true to their characters and I look forward to seeing how Neal and Emma (hopefully) reconcile over time. Update soon, please! :) |
