I loved this so much! Thank you for writing this fanfiction!

me some things in the box

I think that Sadie and Percy would be stupid little butts together, and carter would just talk to each like, "where did we go wrong with these two?!"

it is really good but i want to see how they deal

This is awesome

Sure, the cold-Percy thing I liked, but the Percy-knowing-exactly-what-his-feelings-are-and willing to express them? Unrealistic. Good writing, tho

Nice one man! Awesome chap!

i think that carter and saidie are going to notice right away the change from tartarus and will be like, 'what in the name of ISIS happened to you guys!'

So sad but still so sweet.

I'm on mobile so I can't see if this is a one shot or not... But this was great! If it is a one shot, it's perfect! If it's not, looking forward to more!

Wonderfully written...and I get The Percy/Jason- Percy/Carter thing, like totally. I think it's because Carter's more like the guy version of Annabeth- serious, and focused, while Percy's more like Sadie, I guess. Kinda sarcastic, carefree, and totally winging stuff. That's my outlook. Anyway, nice story.

Poor Percy, poor Annabeth! But good story!

Aw, man. That was BEAUTIFUL! Oh, Percy... Poor Percy...
Keep up the GREAT work!

that was really sweet :)

I am really in tears right now. i loved it.