It's the best story I've ever read. You're a very talented author .

U can't be a normal human to manage to write a such chpter it's made me crying hard I really feel pain in my heart.
How could write in this amazing way ?!
So many times I reread this amazing story especially this chapter"13"
I swear that you are the best writer on earth.
When you ever describe make-out session or
kissing sitution you make my whole body shivering down my sine. you amazing.
My favorite characters ever OkiChi.

It amazes me quite. this story greater than any greatest story
you should be intelligent
you r a damn great author
my friend advised me to read Crazy and fateful and said they are amazing but I didn't believe her untill I read them. she was right they amazed completely me to the core thank you very much

When you are drunk you will not think of ur underwear and Chizuru was in a state of shock she didn't push Okita away when he tried to kiss her. And she forgot Okita because he wasn't conscious and because she knew that he was trying to take revenge from the intimate moment her with Kazma in that restaurant. The story is very beautiful and very very logical and very no defects. The writer so creative and placed in front of the reader's eyes a vivid picture of what is happening in the story. I've read a lot about Okita and Chizro but your stories and style in narration and description of attitudes, people, emotions and things makes the story a vivid picture in the reader's imagination as if the reader watching the story in front of eyes.

u should mention more details about her pregnancy months about her giving birth, about second baby and about her and the guys reaction moment the baby was given birth.
u can update ova or more chapter
never boring.
ur the most awesome writer ever.

It's a wonderful story I think it'a little more bit better than Crazy although I'm bossesed with both of them.
I still reread them. so many times I reapeted reading them.
ur the best writer ever.
plz update more chapters for this story or write more stories about Okita and Chizuru.
Blindly, I can rate ur works 20/10 far more the average.

Fuck fuck fuck
u had to mention more and more details about their first intercourse.
U rly pissed me off

I've just finished read ur amazing story. I love it as much as I loved Crazy. Both are super amazing
I think I like fateful more than Crazy alittle bit.
I always like and obsses with Okita and Chizuru as a cuple, they r the best couple ever and for ever. I believe in love that end up with marriage otherwise doen't consider love. untill now, ur the best writer ever and so genius bcuz ur able to write such details which make the read able to imagine the whole situations and every small details as if I watch on a T.V or on a screen. u make a vivid picture about what happens in ur stories. I'm greatful to u.
My heart's squeezing cuz I finished reading this great story.
absolutely, it affected me very deeply.
All my respect to u.

College*

I generally like this story, although it has a few things I don't feel comfortable with. I mean, he CHEATED on her, right? And all she can think about is how much she wants him back and how bad her brother was by stepping on between them? Sure, the man she love most in the world went sleeping around with several random women out of some sort of selfdispise but leave that alone... She found more than a few pieces of lingerie around his dead drunk ass but who cares, let's clean his crap up... I mean, it doesn't sound real. It's kind of insane for a woman to put aside such an unfaithful act because "she loves him and wants him back badly". Does she love him more than she respects herself? What kind of woman go happily fuck a guy while surrounded by the panties of his previous one night stands? Yet he managed to found several of them who didn't give a shit about it... Doesn't sound healthy, right? Now his girlfriend doesn't seem to give a shit about it either because all she can think about is that he acted that way because of her nosy brother and his own immaturity, yeah, so that fact makes the whole thing more bearable. It's just... NO. No way. No healthy minded woman would stand that. No healthy minded woman would put that aside and no healthy minded woman would forgive nor forget something like that that easily. Where's the disgust? Where's the repulsion? He fucked and fucked faceless girls on the bed he swore he had took only her to, yet she melts in his arms without complain...? If that happened to me, all I could think about would be how those arms held other women's naked bodies, how those lips did unthinkable things to them, and then being a doctor I'd obviously think how that reckless behavior could put my own health at risk. It's disgusting the way she decides that his mental state, his sense of insecurity at the time and her brother's meddling can explain his actions well enough for her to conclude that she wants him back no matter what. Fuck his carnations. Fuck his messages. He would have to crawl until he left a hole in the floor for me to forgive what he has done. He doesn't look particularly sorry for the cheating but he feels sorry about the whole thing without any particular worry, he doesn't reflex twice about the fact that she came to clean his shit out of the room he fucked another girl in merely hours before (did he even take a bath between each intercourse? Can't help but wonder). So in the end he dispised himself more deeply for being a drop out good for nothing collage student than for hiding out like a freaking coward while repeatedly cheating on the woman he claims to love most isn't that bad because "he's gonna make things right". He suffered more by the first than by the latter and that makes another huge NO for me.

I think this Chizuru is as sick in the head as Souji is, really, and it darkens the whole story. Insane, unhealthy love is what this is for both of them.

same with the last two reviewers i got mixed feeling with this story, i admit the story is nice but there are some parts that are disappointing maybe where the part where souji cheats on her & chizuru got drunk but i like her development though.

Well... (Just as the last reviewer) I have mixed feelings about this story. It was right at first but the 'Chizuru is drunk' & the 'Okita cheated on her with all those girls because she deserves someone better' where big NO's for me...

They were in a relationship for like- 2 weeks? And the kind of drama was pretty intense so... I don't see them having a very healthy thing. I mean- Souji (why are all of them calling him for his surname on your story? Even Chizuru calls him 'Okita'?) is his first boyfriend! Things should be slow & cute (at least for the first months?), I don't know where all this angst came but... it wasn't needed.

What else? Ah yes, Chizuru is a medicine student right? She should have more common sense, even if she's naive about social things; she must be pretty smart to know about alcohol effects on people. The scene of the party where she was drunk was awfully ridiculous.

I couldn't made it after chapter 15, it was just so dumb (like seeing two teenagers crying because their 'monthly love story' was over), if you want to add so much drama to a romantic plot, maybe you should make a better (and longest) setting for the relationship, something that helps the reader to be emotionaly engaged with the couple.

Ah, sorry, I kinda didn't bother logging in but the guest name used is my username here.

I have very mixed feelings regarding this fic...
I found the first 10 or so chapters a really great read but when the drama started up, it got a little too intense... I still wanted to read on & did so because you have a really great story here.
I like how chizuru strengthens her resolve and sticks to her decisions. And sen made for a fantastic support.
What I am conflicted over is how okita cheats on her, and while he's sorry about what he did to get over her, he isn't sorry about the actual cheating! In fact he does't even remember till the next day where even then he's very passive about it although he obviously regrets his decision as we see later. I just felt that it was sort of never brought up in proper detail. I dunno.
But I do like how chizuru handles things very maturely at this stage. Also the guys are all in character, the whole bit when she cooks for them and early on when they go to bar is great!
It was a good and engaging read :)

Same Ol Heisuke