| Reviews for Birth of the Forest |
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Guest chapter 22 . 7/20 Hi Karldin! I just wanted to than you for writing such an amazing story I loved it so much that I finished it in a day! I am also begging you kindly if you continue this story don't kill Mito please but that is your dissuasion |
Guest chapter 22 . 7/7 5 years ago was the last update. It is a pity that most likely this story is abandoned now but I hope you're doing well. It was a pleasure to read what you did write and publish! |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/5 You are fluttering between the names. I thought Naruto wanted to be called Naruto despite the memories and the changes? |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/4 Hmm idk how I feel about Sasuke essentially taking Naruto's place with Zabuza and Haku. I'd like to see it more closely to believe it because as is it seems a bit ooc for me. |
BeyondRed chapter 22 . 6/25 Finish dis please |
AKnooks chapter 6 . 6/21 I'm just waiting (and wanting) for Tobirama or anybody to say something that'll make Hashirama/Naruto go into his depressed mode. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15 so good |
aira chapter 3 . 5/26 i wish haku was atleast alive but both of them is isn't bad either |
aira chapter 2 . 5/26 i like karamas suggestion though i think he will choke on his saliava n den die i think instead of laughter ... |
Guest chapter 11 . 5/21 I am dropping this bullshit. Hashirama is first said to have taught Tsunade her chakra control and blasts a fucking forest with just chakra explosion. But for some reason, when he meets his granddaughter, she had better control than he has. Now we see the author saying Itachi would match Hashirsma with a bullshit Ems from nowhere. But that didn't even the primary issue. Hashirams had the Kyuubi in this life, but the author is so determined to nerf h that he doesn't use it when he is facing the author's favorite characters. |
radTWITCH chapter 18 . 5/4 I really liked how you did Mokuton and all of Hashiramas skills in this. Most ff that try Mokuton do not do it very well and I dont think I have ever read one that has done it this well. The writing is also really well done, and I really like how you did Itachi and Sasukes characters too. However, I just dont like how he is not Naruto anymore. Everybody knows hes Hashirama now, Mito has come back to life to be his wife so he is just living as Hashirama not Naruto and I dont like that. I really wish you did not bring Mito into this story at all, and have no one or maybe one or two people find out that he is hashirama, also could have done without having Kushina in it too, but I get the feeling she may have an interesting twist later in the story so its not that big a deal. |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/9 Hella weird.. |
bloodyredfox chapter 1 . 4/9 Honestly, i came here for a good naruto ff and not a hashirama reincarnation one. After 2 chapters, i am gonna leave it there. Kurama sounds way too OOC, no one questions the sudden changes in the looks, pace and behavior of the OOC naruto and how does one change in a jinchuuriki seal even bring back the shodaime and keep kushina alive? All jinchuuriki die when their bijju are removed from them, no exceptions. Oh well. Good for you and ppl who like reading these ffs. |
Madara uchicha chapter 22 . 3/16 Can you please update the story and continue writing? |
Ellemeno chapter 22 . 2/18 It's sad that this is dead. This is one of the best Mokuton stories available still. It was a fun ride, but damn what a cliff hanger you left us on. |