The main problem with this fic is that an eight year old has no capacity to understand the concept of suicide, they can only mimic what they see other people do. So this wasn't believable to me at all. You should have made Sephy at least 12 for this to be believable

English isn't your first language! You write better than most native speakers! Trust me, because I've read quite a few fics, and I'm really picky about grammar. I really like this fic! So sad... I don't see how anyone could hate Sephiroth after reading this.

You are goddamn amazing. Your great. I sent you an invite for my C2. Your talent would be perfect in it.

Beautiful!I really really loved this! U got lotsa talent n im jealous! ;)

Well, you write better then about half of the internet population. Trust me on this, your English is fine. (:

As for your stories, you write quite well- I'm surprised you don't have more reviews, really. I normally head in the exact opposite direction of any Sephiroth 'fic, but this one wasn't that bad. Good work! -goes off to read your other stories-

i loved this story!
but u learn english as a hobby?

Wow. Great! And for your English: I wouldn't know since it is not my first language as well -.-;;

Aw poor little Sephiroth. That story made me sad. Very well written...but is this an A/U in which he dies, or do they find him and bring him back to life?

About the english, it's perfect except for like one typo in the whole thing. You write better than some people who have spoken english all of their lives...

WOW! That was great! Holy crap, that was great! Okay, I'm going to go cry now. Great story!

You've got better grammar than a lot of Americans, and that is quite me. I always like Sephiroth deathfics. Anything where my favorite character why. But you wrote it very well according to the English mechanics of language, and I liked your topic. There's not a thing to really complain about!

.::sniffs::. It's so sad! I wuv Sephy-sama *_* he's ver mature for an eight year old. But I guess that comes with the whole Jenova thang. I reaaly like how you metioned that his eyes aren't always mako green but occasionally electric blue. I think that e. blue suits him very well ne? lol..well keep up the great work!

-Nev

WOW this is beautiful. I love the emotion, the desperation, it is beautiful. You complemented me, but this simply blows me away

I Love It!

Who would've known that English wasn't your first language. You write better than me! Thanks for reading my fic, it's really cool to know that someone who could write this is allowed to enjoy my cra-I mean stories. I have a terribly bad habit of calling my fics crap. Oh well, if I wasn't about to fall asleep I'd write how incredible that story was, but if I don't end this review right now you will have a head splat for a review and I don't think you'd really appreciate that. I really talk to much so I'm going to stop before I end up writing a story longer than yours! Keep writing and all those other nice things that reviewers are supposed to say to the authors.

*cradles Sephy-chan* This isnt youre first language? Damn you! You're too good, you make us look bad! (Kidding, of course XD) I love this! You convey emotion so well. Deep thinker for such a young child, but then again, I suppose Sephiroth would be. *pets him rather fondly* Keep it up!

This is very good... I am such a fan for angst fictions.