Reviews for Two Worlds
Uov chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
ive been waiting for 2 years i believe in you and this story! 3
EverMatcha chapter 5 . 4/19/2015
You broke my heart! :'(((( this is tragic! I was kinda hoping he'll turn into human. It's... heavy! D:
But that doesn't make it bad story though. It's still great! :) I just wasn't expecting it to end like this.
dragonflywhisperer568 chapter 5 . 10/18/2014
I must say, that was a very...unexpected ending...I'm not sure if I like it or not...

The writing and story were amazing, but the ending... T-T It was almost Moffat worthy lol
QueenofRhymes chapter 5 . 8/16/2014
A really sad but believable ending
I LoVe TeNtEn chapter 5 . 7/29/2013
UpdateeeEeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... ill give you a cookie if u didddd! I kinda don't like inos role it makes me think she murdered all those people and told the police she was crazy o.o and because she's such a whore LOL I mean 6 boyfriends? And SHE'S ADOPTED for gods sake why does she have to be such a show off infront of tenten o.o for all those ino pig lovers I'm soreh (I copied sakura in ino pig hehe)
Animefangirl95 chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
Whoa that's crazy
yowarul chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
So tragic! I thought it would be a happy ending
Aku tidak menyangka..
Ami1010 chapter 5 . 7/12/2013
WHAT?!

If that was real then someone tells me where my Tennie is; I want to hug her. :'(
Shikaku Akine chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
Eh? It ends like this? it was totally unexpected. ne, author-san!
What actually happened to Neji?
shimmeringbluelight chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
Wait... wait... WAIT!

Am... confused? Was it all just in her head? Was she high on something? A psychological disorder perhaps? Or they did happen and a sequel is coming up? Sorry I think I asked four questions... and am really hanging in suspense! Just shared your story to a friend and then voila! I saw the "Complete" status.

Ohhh please enlighten us! Still love this though :D
Lili Bibi chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
Huh...?

Im srry im just a little confuse... So is Neji dead? And who shot Tenten's father? Does Tenten really have psychological trauma at the end? Or she herself think she is fine? Omg...

I enjoy reading the chapie though! But I was expecting a happy ending, but this is great though!
myownpath101a chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
Holy Crap. Good, unexpected ending. Iwas kinda leaning towards the "happy ending!" thing, but this was a whole much more realistic
Morning Glory chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
End? you mean thats all?
:(( waaahhhh why? This is suppose to end happy T-T this is a fairytale right:(( *sniff* *sniff* but anyways Ill accept it with all my heart even though it hurts:((
EpicGlompDinoGirl15 chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
0.0 Wha?! That's a messed up ending! But the rest of the story was good. Tenten and Neji were a bit Oc but they kinda had to be since one of them was a merman... ehehe well yup so bye! Luv, ME 3
Guest chapter 4 . 6/25/2013
Uh yeah I want to! I've been dying to see the next chapter and look! ANOTHER FREAKING CLIFF HANGER! GRRRR, right now I hope you get rapped by sharks and get slapped repeatdly with a rubber duck! Why can't you update at least two chapters? Please for the love of Kami will you update more because I really love this story - lady of the OCs because I'm to lazy to log in
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