It's so sad you have left this story for your other series because this one is brilliant,your orignal adventures are completely amazing(you probably already know that I think) plus this is one of the few stories where the doctor actually feels like the doctor-quirky way of talking and everything, the doctor's mind assualt made me feel like I was reading an actual official doctor who novel
I hope you will continue this someday!

Oh I liked their last moment with Charlie. And the Doctor's confession. I think you hit all the right notes.

So sad! You made me cry... I was expecting something, even her trying this, but I wasn't expecting Charlie's reaction. Will he have learned, if he ever wakes up again?

Ah, jerk species are so resilient in Doctor Who.

Ah. So rude.

Being old comes with so much baggage. :L

Finally back. Have to reread after the update! Charlie; still so sad.

I don’t know how I missed an update on this one! :O I thought for sure I had it followed! Still absolutely love this fic. Lol, the little bit with throwing the food on the camera was kind of adorable. I know, I’ve read a lot (& by a lot I mean probably way too many) Doctor Who fanfics & I’m pretty sure you write some of the best original adventures I’ve ever read! Seriously! Their always really well written & you got the characters down so well & everything is always so well thought out & flows nicely! As always thank you! & I’ll always be looking forward to reading more!

Awesome story, thank you for writing it 3

So lovely to read back the whole story and these updates! :D

*leans back, chin in hand*
Huh. So that's what the stakes skyrocketing through the roof looks like.

ooh boy. that can't be good. can't wait to see how they get out of this mess. so i hope you can update again soon! :)

Oooohh! I always hoped you would continue this someday! So happy to see you update

This is a fantastic story. I'm greatly enjoying it so far. Please, keep up the outstanding work. I look forward to the next chapter.

So great to see you updating again! Almost forgot how much I like this story. Fantastic update! The Doctor and Allie are so cute together. Hope you continue to work on this story!