Not sure why there’s a complaint of a clean slate character’s personality. It’s a fanfiction for a reason; you’re giving the author criticism for the wrong things. You really think every person’ll improve that way?

Yo,i was really interested in this story so i went and downloaded the full version. It was really disappointing/offensive. Despite it being practically word for retelling with just added curse words and snide inner commentary. I dont if your just young or just didn't put that much thought into it but you mishandled and severely underestimate every serious issue you write about. Substance abuse, neglect, self harm, child abuse, gender confusion. You include all of these but dont ever seem to understand the cause or consequences of them. Not to mention how unbelievable twisted you version of Yu is. Goddamn her parents order the wrong uniform so her reaction, buy a complete new wardrobe and leave all female clothes behind and then proceed to lie to everyone she meets about her gender for... reasons. Rather then simply ringing the school and correcting them and living a normal life. Plus her wrapping her chest really pissed me. Nevermind all the health risks of doing that, nevermind how impractical it is,nevermind the cost and time to do it every day and forget about the fact she's doing it all to spite parents who dont even know she's doing it. No what pisses me off is SHE OWNS A BRA but decided not to pack them, why!?. Honestly I seriously doubt you put any thought into this because its incredibly offensive to anyone who has ever had to deal with any of these issues. So simply fuck you.

GOD I can't wait for Yu to meet Naoto. They're gonna end up as that one image of two Spiderman pointing at each other.

I finished reading the original on pdf and will wait patiently for this story to catch up to that. out of the persona games 4 has quickly taken the spot as my favorite and as a gender bender i enjoy this one even more becuase as a gender bender it plays well into the themes of Persona 4 and teenagers being teenagers. while I am curious about future events i will sit and wait. hopefully when it updates i will still be riding the person train that is in my brain.

I'm honestly just wondering about the interactions with Naoto. Really want to see what happens there.

WAIT PATIENTLY?! THIS STORY HAS LONG UPDATE TIMES FROM WHAT I'VE SEEN!

So is there some other place I can read this fanFicin full?

Looking back at the past from the future... GAH! I don't get what any of this is meaning!

7 Chapters... so far, each has only been one day. You first made this back in 2013. I feel like I'm never gonna see the end of this story.

Hmmmm. So he is actually a she? Wonder how that works. Probably more complicated than trying to explain the lore of Kingdom Hearts

I can't exactly say that this story's premise is unique, but the fact that you've deviated from events in-game and given Yu a developed personality at least means I won't have to suffer reading through yet another transcript of Persona 4's story masquerading as a fanfic. Aside from some dodgy grammar and word choice in certain expressions here and there, I have no complaints about the writing itself. Knowing that you and a group of your dearest friends are working together on this makes me feel kinda warm and fuzzy inside, so that's nice. I can honestly say that this work has the greatest number of betas I've ever seen in a single fanfic. Usually it's one or two max. You all have such distinct personalities, it's almost like y'all are the cast of a Persona game yourself. In any case, having that many people working together on the same thing can't be easy, so you've obviously figured out how to collaborate. So just keep doing what you're doing and you'll be fine. I'm gonna follow this story, so expect plenty of reviews from me in the future.

This is a really cool story! Thank you so much for taking the time to write this and share it with us! :D

Fate go is a very good excuse.

very good

Wouldn't this imply they don't even remember her name I'm quite sure yu is a distinctly male name and if the listed her as yu rather than Yuma that's pretty bad.

Didn't read yet just thought I'd mention that.