Wonderful take of the story - loved it

Honestly perfect 3

Oh my gosh I love this story so much! It was amazingly written I'm literally crying right now, it was so beautiful!

this was purr-fect

I loved this long oneshot with a re-imagined verson of "Tallahassee" and beyond. I'll admit it caught my attention because I'm from Indiana, but more than anything, I love how much more affecting and heartbreaking this whole storyline is with Killian in Neal's role. Of course, he would have never just betrayed and abandoned Emma as Neal did, but they were still pulled apart and she was lead to believe he had. I loved Henry in this, and that Killian is his dad. The reunion at the end is very touching and powerful. Lovely job! Thanks for sharing this!

Omg, this!

I heart this sooosooo much!

oh my god! this is one of the sweetest, cutest AUs I've ever read! i loved it!

You have no idea how much I wish this had happened instead of Tallahassee x x

*HannaH*

I love this version. You highlighted the difference between Neal and Killain. THIS is why we love Captain Swan. Awesome job.

I can not believe I only just read this fic! I have gone past it so many times and just ignored it... WHAT WAS WRONG WITH ME?! Sorry for that outburst. Anyway, as you could probably tell I love the one-shot :)

This made me happy, because Indy is my home town. So that was awesome. And CAPTAIN SWANNNNN, SO MANY FEEEEELS. 3

love it!

This is just he most wonderful thing. You are a wonderful writer and this brought on the tears for me. I absolutely loved it!

I certainly think you should write stories in book form and I'm pretty sure that you would not be turned down. Your writing is amazing and I think you are a great author.
-CookiesandCaramel

love it :)

Oh, you made me cry in all the best ways. Also: elegant way of pointing out the differences between Killian and Neal. Subtle, like a brick to the forehead. :D

Thank you so much for this. Also, I live about 90 minutes from Indianapolis.