So sweet.. I'm melting~
From Sasu narration and Naru flashback when they were very small, I guess the both of them had gone a long way back (now I'm imagining so many scenarios in my lil SasuNaru's mind) fufufu
As always, great one-shot.

well then that went well :D

Noooooo! I wanted smut
Oh well this was a great story thanks!

Aweeee That is sooo cute! :D

Very sweet

Excellent! It was only a chapter long, but it oozed brilliance. I loved the interaction between them outside the Night class- it really sums up their relationship.
I agree with some of the other readers about it being too abrupt and short- I definitely wanted to be reading more at the end. Maybe do a chapter on their new relationship?
Please look into something for it!

Ftj!‼-O :-P ;-) :-( :-) :-! :-$ B-) :O :-* :-D :'( :-\ O:-) :-[

YES WE WANT A LEMON SCENE GOOD LORD YES
THIS WAS SO CUTE AND SWEET AND WELL WRITTEN

The end is too abrupt. There is practically no transition from the memeory to the Valentine seems like the story's cut short. My opinion is that question has no place in the story anyway.
Besides that, you have good potential .Your writing has definitely improved -I red all your stories, and I'm not that interested in lemon scenes (as in I haven't checked those on your webstite). I like good writing, and that's why I'm glad when I find someone promising.
A request: could you give Naruto some more spine?
I don't have anything against sasunaru, but in your stories Sasuke is always so ..somewhat insensitive and emotionally retarded, and Naruto quite masochistic. Sasuke deserves a punch sometimes.

no wonder, i cant find your story
it's T rated hehe
but, finally i found it after open your stories :D
tehe
and i like it
so sweet :)

I wish for lemon but it really isnt needed for the story haha

cute oneshot!

Awwwwwww that was super cute! Geez, I can't believe Sasuke went through all that trouble to get Naruto to be his valentine, and ro think, if Naruto never slept in class and wasn't assigned that hard math problem, they wouldn't be together. ...it's kinda weird to think that Orochimaru was the reason why Sasuke and Naruto got together.

AWWW! I was so TOUCHED and tingly with Sasuke's last words! XD

SO SWEET! I loved it, even if you didn't add the lemon scene. ;)

Excellent!

Gosh, I'm so glad that you've made this super sweet one-shot! :D Lately, I couldn't find much stories to read that are really good. :( But I'm so thankful that yours is still marvelous!

Simply sublime ;) Keep up the great works!

This was so adorable. I loved it. :)