This is amazing. Jack... :D

Trying to kill people with feels, are we? Because I'm pretty sure you succeeded. Brilliant writing and I can't wait to read more.
Keep it up.
-TLK

ok, this is brilliant... and seriously... keep going... this story give a whole new meaning to "the TARDIS is a paradox machine"

Thank you, Rose-Mun. It's not like I really needed my heart, anyway. :P In all seriousness, this is fantastically done. I've still gotta read the other two chapters, but this alone is a brilliant one-shot. And I'm just gonna say, I love how you implemented the telepathic/mind sharing thing. It's an element of any relationship with the Doctor a lot of authors seem to like to skip, and not only did you not skip it, but it's written beautifully

Right, I'm gonna go finish up my reply to you now.

Awww, yay! This made me sad/happy/twenty different emotions! I'm so glad you decided to continue it!

On a side note: In "The Runaway Bride," I cried like fifty million times. Any time Rose was mentioned, I cried. At that look on the Doctor's face when he was drowning the Racnoss, I cried. I cried through the whole end of the episode. And, then, when he said, "Her name was Rose," and his voiced cracked at the end, I just died inside and started sobbing uncontrollably. But, in this chapter, I only slightly teared up, and I think it's because he really still has Rose. Your story is making me happy.

Anywayyy, can't wait for the next chapter!

I loved the first chapter, I cried so much, and I'm so happy you continued it! It's such a brilliant and heartbreaking idea, and I love it!

I'm wondering what will happen, if you continue it that far and along the series plotline, when the Master steals the TARDIS...

Thank you for sharing this marvellous story with us! Can't wait for more.

Well done. :)

I cried. This is beautiful.

I was crying! This is so emotional, I love it!

I'd be interested in reading more. Well done.

Hmmm, different but I like it :)

Okay, yeah, this made me cry. And now I'm half-wishing this is how it had happened because at least the Doctor would still have his Rose. Even if it's only for twenty-four hours every TARDIS-year, he'd still have his Rose.

Gah, what have you done to me?! I can't decide whether I should be happy or sad now!

This was freaking beautiful. I mean it.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go curl up in a ball and cry over my Doctor/Rose feels.