Thanks for the warning I don't like slash

And now here I am, the teenage kid. I am okay with you rewriting the story since you said it but I did like this story so far, but hey what do I know, I haven't written anything. The story has a good premise and you are just going to add or take more or less detail. I mean everyone has a life, even those "without a life", shocking to say it right? I will watch out for this story so I can continue reading this story. I think you are doing great and I really like this story. Now I have a request... Can you read how many times I said story? Sorry, it's stupid but one you are accepting OCs. One point five, I have no good OCs for this story so why would I? Two, I said story so many times I probably have a problem or something. Have a nice day and enjoy your life and your writing. Also once again this isn't a revi-

Hi, it's me again now on your seventh chapter here to say I have nothing to say except , hello, and something else you either said not to say or to say in other chapters. I mean this might of been fixed already but you should never give up on what you want to do. Okay good day.

I really like the story so far, I haven't read it all yet but it seems very nice, I probably did this too early but I would just let you know this is an amazing story for me at least and I am going to read more after putting this review, but I'm just a child between 10-15 (Not saying my specific age since that is very bad) but you should continue, at least that is my opinion, it's your choice whether to write or not, but I enjoy how you are doing it. I wasn't going to leave a review but I just liked the story so much, I have seen other Harry Potter and Wizard101 ones but this one is special. Thank you for making this story. I am probably too cheesy or somethi-

Thank you for saying this would have slash right off. Sorry but I do not read slash but I do thank you for not leading me on.

I'm glad you posted this Authors note lol it's a bit sad you aren't accepting OC's now though. Aside from my main OC, Amy Winterleaf, I created an OC that I've been placing into various different fandoms because I've honestly fallen in love with him.

Are you going to have a hairy transferred to to the Ravenwood School of Wizardry

I really love this story. It really takes me back to my time playing Wizard101. I was unable to get a membership on my account and I don't know if I even remember my password and username. But my main character was Amy Winterleaf. A Life Wizard, although I was often mistaken for an Ice Wizard due to my name, despite my wardrobe always consisting of green colors. I like to wear outfits with the colors of my School or with the symbols of my School. Nothing flashy, like armor and stuff, but I did prefer to have a long cloak that reached the ground and flowed behind me. My face was usually covered, and I had been working toward getting a hood with the mask that covers the lower part of your face but I couldn't buy it yet. So instead, I wore a different one that drew irritating comments and I can't remember the name of it. It covered everything except my eyes, and had two points on the top of it, like horns or cat ears. I preferred having my face covered. I also preferred long robes but I would wear others as long as I had my long cloak. The cloaks base color was green(not light but not necessarily dark either. More of a grass green type that isn't bright), and it was bordered by a darker green or a lighter green. I can't remember which.

Oh I found something that resembles the hood I wore. Called the Masters Cowl. Well, anyway, as a Life Wizard I was very driven. I was happy to heal those who fought alongside me and always excited to learn a new spell. I would incorporate other spells into my repertoire like everyone else, such as the Fire cat spell and much more. As when I play a game, I immerse myself within it to the point that I feel as if I am thast character. My general appearance without the hood was only something a friend who had seen me without the hood would know, and even now I'm slightly skeptical as I have not played in a while and I can't remember my hairstyle, hair color, or eye color very well. But I know I most likely possessed blue eyes, no freckles, pale skin, and long straight black hair. I was very determined as I fought and often became upset or frustrated if my spells fizzled out(a trait I share with Louise, from Familiar of Zero.) But usually I remained calm and simply casted another spell. I wasn't too confident, I held just enough confidence that I believed that there was a chance I could win but I knew that there was the complete possibility that I would lose. I did not like seeking help, as I was sort of solo but it happened a lot since I knew when to concede the fact that unless I received help, I would be unable to proceed. I went solo a lot because usually people were busy, and I did not want to wait. Not too much from a lack of patience, as much as it was a thirst to complete my quest. Most of the time I had all the patience in the world. But I was quest driven, really and hardly ever took a break. I often took side quests as a result, which deviated me from my main objective. But I did take some breaks to spend time with my pets, as I had plenty of them. One of them was a Cyclops. Some fire cats, dragons, an imp(they're kind of cute), a unicorn...

Maybe you could use my character in your story and help her develop more. Make her a friend of Adrian or Lance maybe? Someone they met quite often along the road and often worried for since she was so driven and determined? Someone who is like a sister to them? I don't know, I haven't played her in a while so I feel a little detached from her sadly. I feel like if I give her overall character to you, you would further develop her personality. As Amy, I was usually a very kind person as I tend to drop into a persona to suit my character and she looked like a very sweet person(whiolst in real life I have quite the temper and don't see myself as very smart). I feel like Amy would be another good role model for Harry and some of the other kids as well. She's kind, loyal, loves nature and animals, strongly dislikes/hates child and or animal abusers(trying desperately not to hate them but it's hard), loves making friends, can be scary when angry, is much like Madam Pomfrey in regards to injuries but gentler, whilst still being firm and motherly(I will not tolerate my friends or acquaintances being injured or sick. It's simply unacceptable.) Amy takes her job as a healer seriously, but she also enjoys helping people. Animagus form could be a unicorn but I don't know if this would suit her. It definitely wouldn't suit me but it might suit her depending on if you decide to take her as an OC. If you do, then you can decide what her Animagus form is. She has studied all of the schools magic and has spells from each but most of her spells consist of Life magic. She keeps two decks, one for her life magic and one for the rest of the spells she's learned. She is a very powerful Life Wizard, owns the standard Life house where she basically lives in a tree, and I think she would appear either at the request of Adrian or of her own volition. If it's at the request of Adrian, she would come regardless if she was busy because she loves making time for her friends, since she views most of them as her family since she's an orphan. This would be the same reason for the second option if she appears of her own volition.

I wanted to at least see the name Amy Winterleaf being used. Honestly, I would burst into tears seeing this name in a story. If you do use her, please have her wear the Spellbinders Hood. She would take it off more at the behest of Adrian probably. Insisting that she needs to show her face at some point, instead of being shy of her appearance. I hope you consider using her although I know you probably won't :P it was just a suggestion for which I am probably wasting your time but I thought that if would be a good idea. I just want to see her being used, even if it's only through a story. And I also know that you're probably busy with life and this story most likely won't be updated because of that.

Oh my Gosh... you are a guy and you have zero problems with gay relationships, as shown when you write about it. Most guys who accept fay people are all like, 'As long as it isn't directed towards me' kind of attitude. Are you perhaps bisexual, pansexual, or bi-curious? Just a thought. I RARELY see a male author who has zero problems about addressing and writing about gay relationships and doing so accurately(because some gays are like this. Some are some aren't it just depends on who you are). I'm the type of girl that loves gay relationships, mostly between guys since I'm straight but I have nothing against girl relationships.

As long as I am not sexually harrassed(I have been before, with words. I don't think they meant anything by it, just joking, but it offended me every time we came into contact with each other. I ended up reporting the guy to some teachers as I am still in High School, and I informed them that if it didn't stop I would take it to the police. I felt violated, despite not being touched(other than the subtle and light touches he tried to do, succeeding more than a few times), simply by the words he said to me. They were always sexual in some way and any comment I replied with was turned into something sexual as well.) I have no problem with who you are or your sexuality. I just don't want advances being made towards me, since I am straight.

But anyway, I asked because not only am I curious, but I just love gay people. Especially men. I always had a bad view of boys, since I have been consistently teased and made fun of by mostly boys since kindergarten. Then I realized that some boys weren't like that. When I was finally old enough to understand gay relationships, I wasn't disgusted, simply too shy to approach the subject until I finally gathered the courage to look into some of the anime, manga, and fanfictions with gay pairings. After that, I grew bolder until finally I just fell in love with it because the idea of a guy loving another guy and not being afraid of showing it is so... well, it's simply beautiful. Especially with all my bad experiences with boys, since plenty have made fun of me for a plethora of reasons be it weight, my name, hair, what I wear, my skin color which is very pale and you can see my veins pretty easily in certain places. So the idea of an openly gay relationship is appealing, because the image I had of boys growing up was mean, little snobs who thought they were better than everyone else. Of course, by now, I know that they have problems and life situations of their own and some take it out on others for that reason, but I also know that there are plenty of people who do it just because they can.

You seem REALLY nice though, since I've read quite a few of your AN's. You're also talkative, which is awesome since I'm rambling and should probably shut up now lmfao. Anyway, awesome story, love the characters you made(Lance and Adrian. Simply precious)

Technically, Adrian is more than a few years older than Zachary. If he truly is 21, and Zach is 16, he is at least five years older.

God, I love Adrian. Go, Adrian!

Ehhh... I don't like childish Harry. I don't like the fact that he's adopted, now or calling Adrian 'dad'. It's a little too much for me but I will try to get through it.

Whenever I played the game, I was constantly on the move when doing a quest. Not even joking. I wouldn't even be done with my main objective before I gathered at least five or so other quests along the way. I was in a constant state of movement and waited for no man. If I did, it would be a friend and I would conceal my annoyance because it wouldn't be their fault. But then, when I had the chance, I would immediately be back at questing. I'm the type of person you can't go questing with unless you keep up with my pace, since I won't be stopping to chat very much.

I like the story! I hope you will update it. Thanks for writing! -

I'm loving this story and hope you will continue it.
Also its also nice to others that play Wzard101 if you play it.