That was fun - to bad it's not complete.

After lunch, her teacher announced that the school
was holding a fire drill. When the alarm sounded,
Carmen and the other students filed out of the
classroom and assembled in the yard outside. As
the teachers read out the roll call, the gang of five
girls decided that this was a great opportunity to
embarrass Carmen in front of the whole school
during the fire drill. They moved over to where
Carmen was standing, near a sewer drain, and
began crowding the poor girl, getting in her face and
nudging her towards the open manhole.

They pushed her and she tripped over and fell head-first down the manhole. When they saw her falling,
the girls started giggling and when Carmen’s name
was called out, they shouted "She’s down in the
sewer!"

All of the other students began laughing. But when
the teachers looked down the manhole and saw
Carmen’s body lying at the bottom in the muck and
the poop, the laughter abruptly stopped. Her head
was twisted around at an odd angle and her face
was covered in blood. Worse still, she wasn’t
moving. There was nothing any of the teacherscould do for her. Carmen was dead. When the police
arrived and went down into the sewer, they
determined that she had broken her neck. Her face
had been torn off when she hit the ladder on the way
down and her neck snapped when she landed on
her head on the concrete at the bottom.

The police hauled Carmen’s body out of the sewer
and sent her to the mortuary. Everyone had to stay
behind after school while the police questioned all
of Carmen’s classmates. The five girlslied to the
police, saying they had witnessed Carmen falling
down the sewer. The police believed the girls and
Carmen Winstead’s death was ruled an accident
and the case was closed. Everyone thought that
was the last they would hear of Carmen Winstead,
but they were wrong.

Months later, Carmen’s classmates began receiving
strange e-mails on their MySpaces. The e-mails
were titled "They Pushed Her" and claimed that
Carmen hadn’t really fallen down the sewer, she had
been pushed. The e-mails also warned that the
guilty people should own up and take responsibility
for their crime. If they didn’t there would be horrible
consequences. Most people dismissed the e-mails
as a hoax, but others were not so sure.

A few days later, one of the girls who pushed
Carmen down the sewer was at home taking a
shower, when she heard a strange cackling laugh. It
seemed to be coming from the drain. The girl
started to freak out and ran out of the bathroom.
That night, the girl said goodnight to her mom and
went to sleep. Five hours later, her mom was
awoken in the middle of the night, by a loudnoise
that resounded throughout the house. She ran into
her daughter’s room, only to find it empty. There
was no trace of the girl. The worried mother called
the police and when they arrived, they conducted a
search of the area. Eventually, they discovered the
girl’s grisly remains.

Her corpse was lying in the sewer, covered in muck
and poop. Her neck was broken and her face
missing. It had been completely torn off. One by
one, all of the girls who pushed Carmen that day
were found dead. They had all been killed in exactly
the same way and were all found at exactly the
same spot. In the sewer at the bottom of the same
uncovered manhole where Carmen had met her
doom. But the killing didn’t stop there. More and
more of Carmen’s former classmates were found
dead. It seemed that anyone who didn’t believe that
Carmen had been pushed, was eventually found
down in the sewer with their necks broken and their
faces torn off.

They say that Carmen’s ghost is still on the
rampage, hunting down anyone who doesn’t believe
her story. According to the legend, Carmen will get
you, whether it’s from a toilet, a shower, a sink or a
drain. When you go to sleep, you’ll wake up in the
sewer, in complete darkness, paralyzed, unable to
move, hearing cackling laughter all around you.
Then, as you scream in horror, Carmen will come
and tear your face off.

So be careful who you bully, because you just might
find yourself on the receiving end of the curse of
Carmen Winstead.

FACT: About two months later, 16-year-old David
Gregory read this post and didn't repost it. When he
went to take a shower, he heard laughter, started
freaking out, and ran to his computer to repost it. He
said goodnight to his mom and went to sleep, but
five hours later, his mom woke up in the middle of
the night from a loud noise and David was gone. A
few hours later, the police found him in the sewer,
with a broken neck and the skin on his face peeled
off.

Even Google her name - you'll find this to be true.

If you don't repost this saying "They hurt her," then
Carmen will get you, either from a sewer, the toilet,
the shower.

They hurt her

A bit exaggerated, but it's funny. Made me wonder if Naruto acts out just to get ramen to eat.

LOL. This was nice. Pretty true to character I think.

interesting... keep it up!

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...how long was it since this thing was last updated...?

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...saa... i shall be waiting...

The first five chappies are fun. I especially enjoyed Naruto and Iruka together.

cdk

Funny and cute.

Update really really soon!

i've noticed you havent updated in a long time. REALLY long time. pleez update!

I love your style! The way you are able to connect everything intot he plot amazes me. I do suugest that you actually work on things outside dialogue. Also, check your earlier chapters for grammar mistakes. Other than that, I can't wait for the next chapter to be out. I even liked how you ade the characters act.I really liked how it was incredibly easy to read.

Kakashi-
update, onegaishimasu? ._o"
writing be more fun than flash veggies "
Happy Valentine's Day, too...
Lotsa luv,
your Iruka
:blink: :ph34r:
[can't get outta da habit...luv those smilies XD -eiji]

CONTINUE! Please? What's wrong with ::snicker:: Jiraiya as a replacement sensei? Why does Kakashi need to return to the ANBU? What does Iruka think about this? When're you updating? _

You definitely need to continue this story. If you don't.. well.. I'll be forced to mutilate you via subliminal messaging. Very dangerous craft I run. _

But, anyway. Do it.

Or else.

Ah~!...What's wrong with Jiraiya? Well, this was an interesting story, but it seems to have stopped. I would have liked to know what happens. It's a good story.