You should totally do one where Lucina finds out!

Where do I even begin this review? I read this whole thing in one sitting and now my head is swimming with thoughts about it. You've pulled my emotions every which way; I can tell just from reading your words that you love your characters so much and now you've made me love them too. Whether they're having a moment of happiness or despair, everything they go through tugs at my heart. The emotions are so strong. You seem pretty hard on yourself, based on your author's notes, but don't be. Yeah, I can only speak for myself, but I don't mind the random setup. It's okay for the stories to be disconnected because what's more important is making all of them good, and you have. Write whatever you want because you are doing so well. I have so enjoyed reading your work and look forward to seeing where you will take it in the future.

This is a great story I really love it!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!NOT PANNE...BUT...YARNE?-SOBS-NO BUNNEHS

Great chapter! I really like the build-up of the story!

Still loving it! I can't wait to see more of this! :)

Oh shiz o-o Wow. *clapclapclap*

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Frick

I love you for this

I love how you instill a sense of urgency in this chapter. It fits so well too, seeing as Cat is frantically glancing around looking for Chrom during this battle. Very nicely done!

You have written a very wonderful story/drabble so far! Glad someone did decide to write a Chrom/Robin story because it's very good!

Oohh... Grima's comin' out to play... :D
I hope you make this into a mini arc, or at least continue this on in your next drabble (shamelessly asking this out of curiosity and anticipation for what might happen next) orz
Good stuff, as always ]

That was- oh my god. I- what? /shakes head

Anyway, well written as per usual, made my heart break a little though. Grima is a jerk face too. U n U

Don't worry Cat, Chrom can think of something.

And cool! What's the address? I wanna check it out!

This is one of the best Chrom/MU fanfics that I've read on this site, and there aren't many (imo). I love your OC and the way you write the Awakening characters (seriously, you do a great job of portraying their personalities, especially Henry!)

I can't wait to read more of this! :D

No offense, but I can't stand how feminine you make the avatar out to be. You keep describing his "pale skin", his "pink lips" (or something like that, I don't remember). From the attributes stressed, it sounds like you're describing a woman. If I'm reading about something between two guys, I don't want one character to be superfeminine. At that point, (especially given the flatness of the Avatar in-game), it might as well be a guy and a girl.