Hey, cool chap. Still a lot of dialogue, guys, and it does get a tad confusing. Other than that I liked it.

That was a fun chapter. But I want to point out that you have way too much dialogue... Like "still", "it's not your fault" - you guys repeat it a lot.

But it was still fun

Hey guys

I wouldn't be surprised if Vanessa had gone and made the whole pregnancy thing up.

Wow... So much, so much.

You guys use a lot of dialogue, why not throw in a description or two? I sometimes get confused with who says what, then I have to go back and read it again...

But I liked the chapter; I like Rose's reactions.

But I cannot BELIEVE Feliss is so calm about it all. I would've thought she would brood for a decade before even considering talking to him, even if it wasn't his fault.

And did Ruper die or something? Or did I miss the cat. And where's the humanly emotional snake?

Anyways, I liked it. The grammar has improved quite a bit too. :)

Hugsies
SE

It was a bit rushed. And I don't care under what magic spell he was, I'd still spank him, then I'd go time lord on her ass and push her into the event horizon of a collapsing galaxy. GrrRr.

I will climb into this story and kill Adam.

Now they're moving in together. Didn't see it coming.

Well, that escalated quickly.

This was a fun chap - Jessica seems nice.

*leaves review*

Yay, Rose is dating! Now are we about to find out he's the doctor? (She's Rose...)

Was a fun chap!

Hey

How the heck did Nolan get the powers? You never mentioned or you did but I'm just really tired.

Liked it, though.

SE

Okay, I would be SO confused with who I was if this happened to me. Hope Slate gets it good.

Okay, weird! This was a nice chap, cute and Rose has her own evil voice...

Wow, what a fun chapter! Loved the loyal family here, and Adam went to the President!

At least they aren't mad at her anymore, eh?

Hey

Poor Rose, though ditching them all was stupid, but yeah.

Fun chap.