really enjoyed it. kicked me in the gut in the end though!

Well written and exciting, the word play was fantastic.

Aw, she shouldn't leave.

:) I WOULD LOVE A SEQUEL!

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Loved this story, esp because he wasn't mean or cruel, just dominant. I wish they get a happy ending after the war :)

I thought it was well-written, but I'm a little unsure of the plot. Maybe it's because it's been 4 months since I've read Harru Potter, but startinf out I had no clue what or why anything was happening. Hermione's reservations? Severus' coldness? The BDSM relationship? At the end, when Severus knows Hermione wont be there in the morning? I feel like it would be improved by a well-developed back story.

I like the premise for the story, and I enjoyed the fact that it was well-written. What bugs me though is his calling her a slut after saying he loved her... but I know that is my own morals objecting. I liked the story, but that one little word bugs me. Not your fault, it fits in with his personality anyway, but I have personal biases to it unfortunately. Good job all in all though. :)

Love it! :)

Love, love, love it!
Thank you ;-)