So cheesy that it was predictable, but cute fic.

This was cute. I wish there more about Kuroh and Shiro.

This is was great. I wish there were more Kuroh and Shiro fics written.

This is so beautiful oh my gosh! It's certainly the best KuroShiro fic I've ever read for sure, no kidding! I just love the natural flow of this and how you kept everyone so in character. And I absolutely love the way you describe Daikaku and Weismann' relationship in this. It's so sad, but makes so much sense. These angsty German babes deserve more love really! The little dance Kuro and Shiro had near the end was lovely too! Oh and the ending was fine and didn't seem rusting at all so don't worry! You're done an amazing job on this one

I like your pick of destination, but did they have music for their dancing? Otherwise it seems a little awkward and out of the blue.

A good story all together but as a native german I must correct the sentence:
"Ich werde für Ihre sichere Rückkehr, mein Freund wartet"
I doesn't make sense. I guess you wanted to say:
"I'm waiting for your safe return, my friend."
If so I would be better to say:
"Ich warte auf Ihre sichere Rückkehr, mein Freund."
Or less formal:
"Ich warte auf deine sichere Rückkehr, mein Freund."
But I really liked the story :)

oh... oh my... where did these tears come from?
so, so, so, beautiful

Its really funny: first time I saw that possible Yashiro and Kuroh connection I had thought: 'But Yashiro's young...and Kuroh's an old man...' and now its the exact opposite. -_-'

I read halfway through it and then stopped. The writing isn't bad I guess, but I felt like something was definitely off about how you were getting your ideas across. Or maybe it was the flow, who knows.

I want it to continue, I wanna I wanna I WANNA!
so much FLUFFFFFFFFFF

Your writing is so beutiful TTTT I think I've read this one befor and I had so much fun reading it again right now! It was great that you didn't end it too fast but also didn't drag it to the poit it would have been boring (it's a good think, really! It soundes bad to me somehow ).
Thank you so much!

lovely plot...sweet dreamy stry ...i am loving it...keep up the good work..love uuuuu...

İ just found that sorry :/ but i fall in love already ;)

Oh my gosh, amazing!

PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS! THIS IS AMAZING!