Huh, is it wise to split the focus of the story so much? Especially since Kaworu seems to know about Touma's life, abilities, and what is 'supposed to happen', why bother showing it? Wouldn't it make more sense to choose a single world and focus/develop it? I feel the story would've been far stronger if you simply focused on Touma in tokyo-3, trying to deal with the angel threat (esp w/ his imagine breaker (would it manifest in his eva's right hand? Would he be even able to pilot an eva? Would he destroy evas or angels in some way with imagine breaker?)).

I love the parts of Touma in the Eva, it's just fantastic and well written. I'd also love to see where you go with it.

good story but need some improvement like canon fact, spelling, and grammar.

interesting looking forward to the next update

This is really good, as he 'died' and stated something about a sister I'm assuming Rei is the next host or will it still be Kaworu?

nice

I have no saintly clue whats even happening anymore. Too much too fast.

Nice chapter.

It's amusing to see Touma misfortune keep following him.

Touma killing an angel with a rail gun? Nice! I bet Yui Ikari is somehow related to Misaka or something. Hurry up for the next update.

Looks like not only Touma and Kaworu got swapped. And that manipulative bastard Gendo is still confident with his plan even there are so many deviations happened here.

I wonder when the "angel fall event" how Gabriel going to react to Kaworu Nagisa cause it may know he a angel but Kaworu won't know about himself if the whole memories burn away happen

It looks like Kaworu will be trapped in Index universe, so it all comes to Kamijou Touma to finish his quest in Evangelion universe, right? And LOL at Rebuild reference, finally Kaworu made Shinji happy now?

You should write a chapter for touma and one for Kaworu,
I wonder what's going on the other, considering that touma, shinji is more idealistic, and will not be pushed around by asuka (the only ignore as mikoto.

This...is actually really good. Though if I had to complain about one thing its how the story is kinda being railroaded.

And yes I do realize that's the entire point ala Universal will but those tid bits where both Touma and Kaworu break canon are hilarious and interesting (Eva 01 doing warm up exercises and Styil crapping himself when wings appear.). At the very least those small moments deserve an original line or 2 from the home cast.

Anyway consider this followed.