Thanks for this story
I really enjoyed it

Like wow, I can totally see this happen. I warls really wondering what happened in that time skip and how Agon ended up going to the same school as Hiruma. This is so perfect and beautiful... THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS

Amazing piecd of art ! The pairing is written flawlessly in my opinion, love the way you bring depth and weaknesses and feelings to strong characters like Hiruma and Agon. Perfectly believable, I'm amazed by the quality of the writing !

Read this fic like 5 times already, all in different places mind you, and it still so, so, so beautiful.

Im gonna cry this is written in such an excellent way oh my god the slow-ish build and how the relationship was fixed ugh its so great and crazy in character to sum up how perfect this is

also, that part where hiruma feels like he deserves a team of and with geniuses because hes one of them, and then later when he realises that hes better at making others better was just the cherry on top for the hiruma charaterization i think you got him just right seriously

thank you for sharing this wow im gonna re-read this so many times i swear wow wow

I love this fic a lot! Salute to virgin Hiruma who stands tall in front of the sex beast Agon. I kind of expecting a full course sex though *lol* Nevertheless, the affection Agon shows Hiruma is just so cute.

Oh my gods, that was so damn perfect. I love it, so damn sexy and exactly the hotness I've been searching for after reading Eyeshield. Author human, you are beyond awesomeness

gods. holy god.

i haven't been reading fics for this fandom in a long while, because back then there was a severe lack of fics for agohiru, my otp, but coming on here now, after so long, to find this fic... holy shit, that was gorgeous.

the pace, the story itself, brought to its conclusion so well, over the span of three chapters (it felt so much longer), the characterization (ok, they were all splendid and IC, and it was so good i had to stop a few times to squeak like a fangirl, because damn it author, you write 'em well)...

everything for this fic was splendid. i consider this a beautiful fic and i'm glad you decided to write it and post it for us. it deserves ten times the amount of reviews it has. it was really, really good. thank you.

holy god thank you.

SOY

I may be a little in love with you right now, Ok, make that A lot. Ahhh, I sincerely don't think I have enough in me to convey just how incredible this is.
This story is just brilliant. The characterization was perfect, the right amount of craziness and intensity combined with the right amount of feelings and humanity. This is how I read them in the manga.
And you didn't just make a romance or a porn, you developed the characters naturally and put Football as the connection in all the story. I can't think of a better written story in this fandom. I CAN'T.
Last but not least, Gosh this boys are fucking right together. Both in manga and in your story the way they understand each other is wonderful. This just works so well, for them, I really pity all the others because Hell, this two separated are scary now together...*pats all other boys*

So, thank you so much for writing this and for sharing it with us. I truly hope you write more for this fandom in the future :D

That was so hot O#O! I loved it! And the end was so cute! Those two are so cute! You're so cute! XD
thanks a lot for writing this great story, and I really hope you are thinking in making another AgoHiru XD!
Naa, just kidding... but please!?

I absolutely love this story so far. Agon and Hiruma are very much in character, how they are bickering and trying to intimidate each other...and at the same time, you can feel this strange tension between them. Nice!
I also like that this story has a real plot that actually makes sense and that it's not just a sex scene with a bit of decoration around it..
As for the next chapter, I guess there shouldn't be any problems posting it here since the purge of M-rated stuff seems to have stopped.

I love this! Really well written, continue like this! As for the last part, if you post the direct link, i don't really mind if its here or in another page. Don't take too long, please!

I liked your fic a lot! You really know how to write Hiruma and Agon.
Although, I think you got the ages a little messed up. Hiruma, the Kongou twins, Ikkyu, Akaba, Kotarou, Yamato, Taka, Yukimitsu, Mamori, Kurita, Musashi and almost every other player are in second year when they play against the pentagon. Only Yamabushi, Takami, Ootawara and Onihei ( and Banba and Haraao too, i think) are in 3rd year. Well, it dosn't really matter, anyway XD. Hope you actualize soon!