| Reviews for Contract |
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   llamartina chapter 29 . 4/2 I LOVED IT PERFECTO |
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 29 . 8/28/2019 This was a good story, but I don’t think it will be one I’ll want to reread. I wanted to kill Lucius’s times, so I’m kind of glad you redeemed him, but it only made me dislike him rather than hate him. |
| Me chapter 22 . 6/1/2019 Well just say it all ready! |
| eunjoongella chapter 1 . 10/25/2018 so far I like the plot but its a very hard read.. |
| Kuromai29 chapter 29 . 9/10/2018 I really like this story! The plot line is great! It isn't often you see a Malfoy and a Weasley together or a nice Abraxas. I'm not sure if you're still writing, but I would like to give you a little constructive criticism though. This is the second time I've read this, and while I really enjoy the story, the way you right the dialogue makes it difficult to read. It is very fragmented and doesn't flow very well. In the books and movies the characters do not speak like that, and in real life people don't speak like that. Like right here at the end where Harry and Abraxas are talking about the paintings. Harry says "Odd not to see your own." And Abraxas replies "A painter is working." It would flow better if you had complete sentences, maybe like: H "It's very odd not seeing your painting." A "I have a painter working on a new one. He's also working on one for you." It sounds better when you read it, the flow is great, and it isn't fragmented. If you aren't sure how it would sound, read it out loud and you can find the spots that need work. I do love this story though, and Temporary Home. If you're still writing, I hope this helps! |
| Alexiandra18 chapter 29 . 6/28/2018 It was à really suprising story! And really sweet ! |
| shishi0705 chapter 29 . 2/27/2018 I actually didn't think I would like this story, but it's actually really good. I really enjoyed this story. |
| JayPesk chapter 6 . 2/23/2018 I am enjoying this story you wrote. The only thing I have a problem with is the cadence of your dialogue. People don't speak like this normally. Did you write it in a poetic style on purpose or perhaps English is your second language? Either way, yourstory is pretty well thought out and structured, likeI said, it's just the dialogue isn't written naturally. |
| wandamarie chapter 29 . 1/21/2018 loved the story thank you for all of your time and talent for the story |
| wandamarie chapter 28 . 1/20/2018 I am enjoying the story |
| wandamarie chapter 27 . 1/20/2018 wow getting good |
| wandamarie chapter 26 . 1/20/2018 thanks |
| wandamarie chapter 25 . 1/20/2018 oh yeah getting good |
| wandamarie chapter 24 . 1/20/2018 keep up the good work |
| wandamarie chapter 23 . 1/20/2018 getting good thanks for the story |
