Reviews for 31 Rainbow Snowcones
scarl3twitch chapter 1 . 11/15/2017
*about this one. :) (the previous review was also me, scarl3twitch.:D)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2017
Finished reading this today. :) These drabbles were so different and fun, some poignant character studies and some heartwarming cute stuff. :D I loved Tooth being a fighter in Choose Your Weapon. I also loved #s 21 (Tooth dealing with the aftermath of being coerced into a living weapon was heartbreaking), 23, 26 (Tooth being in such a stressfree, giddy, happy atmosphere was lovely), 28, & 30. Tooth responding "everything" to Jack's question about not being a Guardian was perfect. Like you wrote, it's ambiguous but covers all the events they missed out on since they're immortal. This portion from 23 I LOVED, beautifully written and great insight on Jack:
"It was scary to her, watching his jaw was set rigidly and his eyes, intended to be filled with joy and warmth, narrowed to a reveal a young man bruised and bitter, unleashed after hundreds of years of isolation.

Those were the moments she feared most about him but would never say...the moments when he lost himself in the dark edges of his heart where the anger or frustration still lingered."
Anyway thanks for a lovely read. Hope you didn't get tired of my extensive reviews; I had a lot to say ab
scarl3twitch chapter 1 . 11/14/2017
I'm such a sucker for these snippet/drabble-like stories, and this continues to be such an enjoyable read. I love how there's no storyline or chronology. It's nice just to see the thoughts and interactions between these two (and appearances by other characters too :)). These are some of my favorite sentences (had to read them over to appreciate the imagery):
"Jack then watched gleefully as an ample amount of ice wrapped itself like a helix around the artificial vine. When it reached Tooth's feathered feet, she yelped at the sudden drop in temperature and the way the frost crawled into her feathers like sticky honey."
"The brown that once signified the earthy glow of a warm autumn's day drifted away, and made room for a beautiful white wonderland where the winter frolicked in erratic merriment."
I also loved your take on Pitch corrupting Tooth. And Tooth speaking every language?! Perfect detail! Jack calling her glitter gums is hilarious too. :D Can't wait to finish reading these (it's late haha and I'm halfway through so far). :D
scarl3twitch chapter 1 . 11/13/2017
I'm only on #2 and this is already so cute, thoughtful, and unique. :) I love Jack wanting to hug Tooth just to remind himself how incredible she is. I can't wait to read the rest of these. And there's 31, ahhhh! What a treat. :33 :D
AngelaLove072101 chapter 1 . 6/11/2016
Excellent job!
biddle29 chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
Aw, those were great! :)
0kiJ9jio80i9j9 chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
I completely forgot to review on this before. This. Is. Wonderful. Most beautiful collection of Rainbow Snowcone stories I've read and I especially love the thing you did where you actually mentioned snowcones with rainbow colors (I suppose they would all just mix together into a brown mush huh?) - anyways, love it!

Hibiscus flowers and hummingbirds... darnit, that was clever. I pretty muched liked everything from this.
PrincessTadashi chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
Oh my goodness, I LOVED this so much! I'm a huge Rainbow Snowcone fan, and this has got to be one of the cutest stories ever! Thanks so much for the awesomeness *hugs* Have a blessed one! :)
TheEquestrianidiot 2.0 chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
I would love to see the story of evil Tooth. I had something similar planned, but I'm busy with a Ninja Turtles story, and a crossover between RotG and Slender so I just haven't found the time to get it done.
midillu chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
I LOVED all of them, duh.
LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Love love love this! I really wish for you to make some of these into full story!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
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Ann chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
I'm sorry but if EVER you have time, you should write a fanfic of the drabble you wrote about Tooth being captured by Pitch and turning evil. The small portion you wrote was absolutely amazing and if there was a full fanfiction of that I would die. If not, I would like permission to spread the word (on tumblr) and have people write/draw your idea. But not until permission is granted :) I wouldn't want you to get angry and completely change you mind.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
This fanfic is my favorite in the world of fanfiction! The description was beautiful and each Drabble was unique! I love this fanfic so much! Incredible work!
Lovina chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
I did it again ;_; i read this a long time ago WITHOUT leaving a review. Guilty trip here I go...

All those sweet moments \\\\ they melt me you have a gift for making my heart flutter ;w; awww just come here and let me hug you
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