Hehehehe

This is good

Misaki is such a tsundere here \ / w / \

ASJDKFASJ;DLFJALDF;JAKFJ;LKDFJSAD YEEEEEEEEEESS.
"She's not fushimi." FAVORITE LINE. EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRR3333333333 *FANGIRL SCREAM*

A-WE-SO-ME! *O*

What! Fushimi was blushing!?

But to hear Yata-chan confess like that, maybe it's too much for Fushimi !

When Misaki said "She isn't Fushimi" I just froze...*goes back to fangirling at before mentioned part*

Okay, first off, please know I'm fandom blind. However, I had no trouble getting into this story. However, because I didn't know the fandom, I did not realize until the middle of the story that Fushimi was a boy. I don't mind slash, but I did think Fushimi was a girl at first, that's all. Anyway, I loved that Yata is this guy who feels kind of nerdy and that he feels awkward and is having trouble getting a date. And when the girl asks him out, it's kind of sad. I feel bad for her. When he said, "She's not Fushimi," again, I thought Fushimi was another girl he had a crush on. But okay, it's cool he has a crush on someone. He's just afraid to tell him. You showed that really well. I also loved the little party that Anna and Izumo cooked up. The whole pink situation was funny. I love that he has an aversion to the color. So do I.

I did love when Fushimi comes into the bar, but I am a little confused as to why they're angry at one another. I suppose the reason, though, is that there is sexual tension. I did loved how built up the conversation to the kiss at the end. That was really nicely done. I love that Fushimi tells him that he belongs to him. I do wonder what Misaki and saru mean...but that's just because I don't know the fandom. Also, you sometimes capitalize saru; other times, you don't. I'm not sure if that's intentional...but you might want to check.

I was a little confused about the last part about the confessions. But again, that's just my fandom blindness. I'm sure it's a hilarious joke I just don't get.

Overall, this was a lovely piece. I really enjoyed it.

SPAG:

"I really like you, would you go out with me?"-"I really like you; would you go out with me?"

"They're right. I'll never get a girlfriend" thought Yata-"They're right. I'll never get a girlfriend," thought Yata

There was a few seconds of silence.-There were a few seconds of silence.

"Sorry I must have gotten the wrong building."-"Sorry, I must have gotten the wrong building."

over to Yata who was still standing at the door,- over to Yata, who was still standing at the door,

"I know what Valentine's Day is Kusanagi –san,-"I know what Valentine's Day is, Kusanagi –san,

"Mind your language Yatagarasu.-"Mind your language, Yatagarasu.

twitching (probably because his bar has just been dyed pink) so Yata-twitching (probably because his bar has just been dyed pink), so Yata

I really have no idea why, it just sort of-I really have no idea why; it just sort of

"Idiot" mumbled Anna.-"Idiot," mumbled Anna.

"You're just not good with girls." Laughed Izumo.-"You're just not good with girls," laughed Izumo.

mean by that Yata-chan?-mean by that, Yata-chan?

laugh at me, Kusanagi-san- laugh at me; Kusanagi-san

to meet Izumo's, his mouth opened but-to meet Izumo's; his mouth opened, but

Oh..-Oh...

except at Izumo. The blush on his face rising.-except at Izumo, the blush on his face rising.

"Did you hear that Fushimi?"-"Did you hear that, Fushimi?"

Kusanagi-san what do- Kusanagi-san, what do

or baseball bat which he always-or baseball bat, which he always

him everywhere, Yata-him everywhere; Yata

"Hey Saru!-"Hey, Saru!

that of a child unsure of what to believe- that of a child, unsure of what to believe

I heard you the first time Misaki.- I heard you the first time, Misaki.

"Don't call me that Saru."-"Don't call me that, Saru."

"What do you want Misaki?"-"What do you want, Misaki?"

Homra bar you damn monkey?"-Homra bar, you damn monkey?"

"And what's it to you Misaki?"-"And what's it to you, Misaki?"

"Damn you saru-"Damn you, saru

Fushimi smiled, it was kind-Fushimi smiled; it was kind

I just wanted to visit Misaki."-I just wanted to visit, Misaki."

"Damn you saru let go!-"Damn you, saru, let go!

Fushimi met Yata's gaze with a triumphed smirk.- Fushimi met Yata's gaze with a triumphant smirk.

get a girlfriend Mi-sa-ki-get a girlfriend, Mi-sa-ki

with Misaki, I don't-with Misaki; I don't

you're alone, don't- you're alone; don't

Fushimi sure is popular! XD

Aplause! That was funny actually . A lot more than the depression I write O.O I like how many more Saruhiko got than Misaki _ And a kiss. Thank you