Reviews for Run Away
OhTheOldHiccupHesDeadHahaha chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
For the people saying Valhallarama isn’t Hiccups mother’s name it actually is. If you read the books you would know this. Not to mention the books came FIRST. Although I love both the books and movies it upsets me to see how many people get mad because some one uses the the books instead of the movies. If you don’t like don’t read it
SandGorilla6063 chapter 1 . 2/7/2019
I can nt stress this enough,you got his mothers name wrong!It is Valka not Valhallarama!OAF!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2018
that isnt his mothers name
idiot
lily chapter 1 . 12/3/2018
I don't have a problem with the chapter, it's been okay so far, I do have a problem with the way you responded to criticism:

You can write au without w/o it being ooc? Plenty of people have done it before I'm sure you can too, if you're going to use a canon character as a vessel at the very least keep their personality in tact otherwise you lose the essence of the character and you might as well just use an OC. Using "this is an au" is a lazy excuse.
Blue-Eyes Ethan chapter 7 . 10/20/2018
"Convince me" perfectly said and made me laugh when he said that. chapter rank. 10/10
Guest chapter 16 . 7/26/2018
The best fanfic I’ve ever read. Beautiful story and played out really well.
Luckf938 chapter 9 . 7/3/2018
I like the story but please never use the name Valhallarama for Hiccups mom's name it sounds like a tacky viking themed sales event. Lol
Duckystan456 chapter 16 . 5/4/2018
nice story
Demonica2015 chapter 7 . 10/17/2017
Toothless does have a shot limit in the show on the episode where Berk got the case of Eel pox hiccup said Tothless’ shot limit
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2017
Sorry but the thing were hiccup can't speak Norse that well got me bored
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2017
Well that b1tch is overreacting. First, Hiccup's failures in the ring weren't his fault but the other teens' and Gobber's. Hiccup never did anything to attract the dragons' attention to himself. And Astrid's collision with Hiccup was her own fault as well as Snotface's with his sorry attempts at flirting, not Hiccup's.
jamestheweasel chapter 5 . 9/6/2016
thought that would be a bit more deadly. I expected toothless to hold more of a grudge to snotlout who bullied hiccup but I like what your doing so far.
jamestheweasel chapter 2 . 9/6/2016
expectations: hiccup and toothless proceed to burn them back to the stone age.

reality: hiccup probably explains things. (depressed sigh)
jamestheweasel chapter 1 . 9/6/2016
always love fics like this, good job.
thisisaccountisnolongerinuse chapter 14 . 10/4/2015
This story was absolutely amazing! But I am kinda sad that you forgot that Hiccup can't speak Norse that well!
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