this is an amazing story, i havent stopped reading this, its so good. But could you please update this story.

please oh please update this story. I got so hooked just by the first 2 chapters alone. I'm a hopeless sap for everything Durin. Where almost to the end. I just hope you haven't given up on this story.

I've binge red your story and I can only say: whoa... it's so awesome please keep writing

thank you for leaving the stupid orcs out of the river scene. I don't know what happened to Peter Jackson but he was far too concerned with "action" and not enough about "loyalty" to the book. I mean I don't mind stretching some things but the freaking orc fights bore me...
Also, I like you leaving out the negative way the Company meet Bard. I didn't like Bard -_- at all. The actor was good-looking enough but his character rubbed me wrong and I wanted to punch his lights out. Especially when he got a stick up his butt about Thorin entering the mountain. "you have no right to enter the mountain" my butt. How did you feel, Stickdonkey?

Great chapter!

Poor Kili! Hopefully things will go well between the boys and Kili will be able to tolerate making an appearance at the feast and then leaving.

Feel so bad for Kili so terrified at having to be in a room full of sooo many people.. Hope Fili can help through being there. I hope he can stay calm but I kinda dought he will

Post more please

Great chapter!

*Heart being crushed by FEELS* I'd really like to know what you plan to do with Thorin at the final Battle. I mean, he won't last 30 seconds. If possible, I love Thorin even more because of your fanfic.

Fili's such a darling.

I look forward to your walk through the rest of the book!

Are you going to leave the stupid orcs out of the River scenes? I kinda hope you do, cause...I didn't like the constant orc battling while they float down the river. It was...dumb. And over the top.

You're an evil bastard, ya know that? And I both hate it and fucking love it. I've cried more times than I can fucking count reading this and shouted and screamed and I hate you so much this is literally the evilest thing that has EVER been made.

Well done.

I kinda agree with Thorin Kili is being paranoid a tad much. But on the other hand Kili is still tramatized and scared. I wonder how much it'll continue to be issue for him as hard as tries to act normal will he be able to? I wonder if they end up in the water after all?

Wow I finalllly found this again I lost it a while back I had read about 20 chapters and somehow didn't save it. So I found it 2 days ago and had to re-read.. The torture was so horrible for what they all went through and Fili and Kili going at it and Filli drawing blood on Kili. Thorin beside himself having Kili to shave his beard off but Kili refusing knowing how much beards mean. Then Fili having to kill Kili and the eagles showing up just in time. I wasn't sure what you would do at Mirkwood and when they ended up at Thranduil and Kili being terrified and having a flash back to Goblin town. Thorin isn't sure the elfs are safe( I wonder if Kili would have a another flashback? Cant wait to see what you have planned next

Trite, pathetic, laughable drivel. No plot no action all the charters being arseholes crap.

Good to see you! great chapter, we do need to remember Thandruel IS a parent too, and Kili's fear would have triggered something in him! This next one will be good, most Hobbits have a terror of water, but can they really pander to one and forsake the safety of all? Who would be the best to stay with Bilbo to keep him safe? Very nice!