It's romantic, it's sweet and I love it! :)

I highly enjoyed this story, one of my favorite willxphobos fan fics

aw this was so sweet!

Okay that was sincerely lovely, I really like the line 'magic' which at least personally I picture her quipping with an almost sardonic twist that makes it very Will. I love this glimpse of a possible hidden realm of Phobos - many people see him as a flat character and I love the fact that you made his wrong doings and foolishness start off as something cold and bitter, but come a simple play for Will's heart. You know... power to love, he always wanted a heart of sorts from her ;) LOVED IT! Big thumbs up TT :)

Its amazing. I love the interaction.

Hello,

"Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep" is lovely, just splendid. Sure, it's OC but the character development were done well. I do loved the intereactions between Will and Phobos. And how he remembered the promise from when he was a child. I felt like the pace of the story went too fast, but that's just me. I'm aware of a few errors. Reread it twice just to fix them. Nevertheless, this was a pleasant and soothing story to read. :)

Best Regards,

Teshia14.

The feels...
This is beautiful. It was written so well and only you- a writer with amazing talent- could pull of a Phobos who still has innocence!
Lovely, and well done!

I really like the song and I enjoyed the story as well. You're a good writer

Wow! Didn't expect this kind of story. But it it was touching. OOC or not, I like how you did the characters! Very touching.

Great story! Keep it up!

Nice chapter.

Will and Phobos, seemed like an odd match up at first, but I really liked it.