It was good

Great and interesting story

thanks for this story, call me whatever you want but changing the whole story tide in a single episode made me sad,i also wanted the truth be revealed to all. This in that sense was a perfect story for that

This was probably the best dexter fic I've ever read!

GREAT STORY - GREAT READ

I like this story very much. The end is GREAT! Thamks for writing it

I just wanted to thank you for a much better Season 8 than we actually got. While I never believed Dexter's writers would give us either a happy ended, which required Hannah, or Dexter being caught and having various reactions from law enforcement, media, coworkers, etc. Those were the types of scenes I've always wanted to see. You gave us all of that, plus some really hot SMUT especially at the end. Thanks for sticking this project out. I see you've done a quite a few Smallville stories so I'll have to check those out.

how about you spell Minnesota right next time? Thats sad.

I have to say this would probably have been a better ending to the show than what we've seen on TV (so far at least).

With only 3 episodes left, there really isn't that sense of end-game, it just feels like another season. Hell, even Season 2 and 7 had a more end-game feel with that investigation into the Bay Harbor Butcher. Season 8 should have been more like that, yet nobody in the department is any closer to uncovering the truth, not even Quinn who always knew there was something off about Dexter (the photo, Kyle Butler and much more)

Who knows, maybe they will, maybe it all gets unraveled in the final episode (I hope it puts us all at the edge of our seats as Season 7 ending did), but I feel there's not enough time to expand on that. The Brain Surgeon is an interesting and sophisticated villain... but then what?

Anyway, great story, though I doubt if they did this it would have a happy ending.

Nice story. I've always thought Hannah and Dexter would be a great couple.
Im obvioustly not an expert (quite the opposite actually) but there're some errors, like missing commas or periods, misspelled words (now I can only think of "Lagurta"), sometimes writing "your" instead of "you're" and so on.
But besides that it's great. Especcialy I liked the name Todd. Like Sweeney Todd :D
But Lily Anne is for me too much connected with Dexter rom the book. And he's so different that this one. And it's little weird that you tried to mix both Dexters up by giving them the one Lily Anne. But I guess I can get used to it. :)
Anyway, always happy to read stories like that :)

I'm sure your story is very good but the errors take me out of it. New Year has capital letters. It's "Laguerta" and not "Lagurta." Many of the sentences need commas or periods.
"Hannah was now on the run(period) He wanted very much to make amends..."

Ugh that was so amazing! Thanks for the good story!

A really good story with a good ending, we will see if this happens in the show.

I love it! The only thing is some of the the spelling and other minor this confused me a bit. I had to think about what you actually ment, but over all very well written!

You did fine with the baby (love the name!) but you got the post-birth stuff for Hannah wrong. I think it's 6 weeks minimum before a couple's supposed to have sex again. Obviously some people won't listen to that, but I don't think 3 days later would go too well. And there's a week or two (I think) of bleeding after birth. Other than that, I was really glad to see an update on this story, and I'm looking forward to the final chapter!