Reviews for Wild Eyes
Guest chapter 31 . 7/12
Thank you for the time and effort you have put into this story for the last 10 years! This is weird but when I first came across this I was a young teen (13/14 something like that) and now I’m going to be 21 soon. I’m not entirely sure, but I remember the excitement I had when the first chapter of this story was posted.

Weirdly enough this is my first comment. (sorry, I’ve just always been nervous. even now... 3)

I feel like I grew up with this story and it has helped shaped my view on relationships, and more recently the complexity of abuse. As well as it has kept me incredibly entertained for the last few years. This story has been incredibly important to my personality as well. I’m not entirely sure in what ways yet, but this is the only story I have a strong emotional connection to.

I’m not sure if this made sense but I’m feeling nostalgia after seeing this chapter.

As I am coming more into adulthood I wanted to thank you for taking so much time out of your busy life to give us this beautiful story. Thank you for putting so much effort into this world that you created. Have a good day and be safe. 3
SakiaN chapter 31 . 5/17
I cannot explain how IN LOVE I am with this sequel and it’s prequel. This story is so unique and it gives a whole new world. These stories have given me one hell of an emotional roller coaster and I CANNOT fathom how IN LOVE I am with your writing. The character development and interactions are just amazing. The plot itself is out of this world. I literally read the prequel and caught up to this chapter in just about 4 days. (SPOILER) I do admit I cried a lot at Blossom’s death. But I love how your writing doesn’t give an unrealistic happy ending type of style. There’s gonna be deaths, there’s gonna be heartaches, there’s gonna be sadness. I just love how realistic and approachable the plot is, it’s truly a rare treasure to find. I just hope we see a happy ending for all powerpuffs and rowdyruffsI love how empowering the girls are and especially Buttercup. She’s been slowly falling apart these latest chapters and I hope to see her badassery demon side kicking butt again LOL I absolutely CANNOT wait for the next update. I’m so excited yet scared of what the future chapters hold but I will be looking forward to them nonetheless.
Killjoy chapter 31 . 5/15
This fic started before MCR broke up and it's still going after they reunited.

And that's fucking amazing, keep it up! Love to come back every once in a while and see that you've updated.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/9
You really do like the words "radiate" and "coated",don't you?
Warrior427891 chapter 26 . 4/17
I can't believe it took me this long to find 9 Months and this fic too! I must've been under a ROCK! I love the way you write dialogue and take your time with the plot, these meaty chapters build a different kind of suspense that's hard to find nowadays. I absolutely look forward to the next updates, I can't even wait to finish up to the last update before giving you a standing ovation. This story is a blessing to this site!
Guest chapter 31 . 3/8
! AMAZING
ppgmikaela chapter 21 . 2/29
why did she have to die. honestly one of my fave characters I'm literally crying right now
ppgmikaela chapter 18 . 2/29
OH. MY. GOD THEY'RE GETTING MARRIED. MY FAVE SHIP IS GETTING MARRIED I CANT. BREATHE
ppgmikaela chapter 18 . 2/29
cass and rome are fucking. couple. goals i love them soooo much like omg i can't
red-eyedgal chapter 31 . 12/3/2019
Yay for updates! I know we're getting closer to the end and its exciting but sad at the same time. I wish I could see more Jayden and Cain. Cant help loving those two. :)
AwesomeNumber0 chapter 31 . 12/1/2019
Wow. Has it really been 10 years? That's so crazy to me. I remember reading 9 months when I was in... Middle school?! Oh my God. Again, so crazy to think about. I definitely don't read fanfiction like I used too, but there are a few stories that I will always come back too and yours is one of them. I might have to go and re-read this story from the beginning. Maybe when my finals are over XD.
Thank you for continuing this story. There are so many stories that I've read that'll never be finished, and it's sad but I understand, people move on to other things in their lives and fanfiction becomes a forgotten memory. So again, even with all the shit going on in your life, thanks for continuing this story. It's one of my favorite fanfictions ever, and I'm glad that there will be an ending :)
Also... I read in a review that you might write some more ppg fanfics after this one? I was getting sad that the story was ending but if you're gonna write more... guess I got something to look forward too!
Also, forgive me if I'm wrong but we're you trying to become a published author? If you ever write a book I'd love to read it. I really enjoy your writing.
I think that's all I have to say .. can't wait for the next chapter. Take all the time you need :)
princetonlover chapter 31 . 11/16/2019
Love this story, hate to see it end
Idiot Person101 chapter 31 . 11/13/2019
Wow! Your story is amazing! I love how much the characters have grown. You are a great author with great talent. Wow, I didn't think Ms. Bellum would make an appearance but I'm glad she did. I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is absouluty amazing.
CuteVyper chapter 31 . 11/9/2019
God, this roller-coaster again... God I missed and at the same time Im realizing how fucking old I actually am. And still have the mind of an angsty teenager. GOD.
Anyway hope 2019 was nice to you. Ive read again the last review I made to realize how much of a dingus I was and still am. 2019 was a lot adulthood going on for me and I fucking hated it and still do.
I want to be a kid again... (imagine a 21 yo crying in a corner)
Im freaking glad Carrie and RoseGold brought your writting hopes up to deliver this jewel after nearly a year.
Lets now get on with the review:

First: WE'RE FINALLY IN ENDGAME! WOOOO!
I feel like Im gonna need tissues for these final chapters.
And for the people Im so proud of I might as well whoop and as for those assholes I hate... let Old Granpa have them for lunch.
Review on each character: here we go.
Drums roll please...
a. FOR THE WOMAN OF THE CHAPTER! THE BEAUTY! THE STRONG! THE ONE LOVED BY EVERYBODY!
... BUBBLES UTONIUM! Yeah, fuck Bane up girl! (But not literally please!) The baby of the group turned into a goddamn warrior finally! Shes perfect! Aaaahhh! I feel so proud of her! And omg Im truly surprised she had no mercy on Brat! Even thought she was a bitch she was still pregnant but... meh I hope her spawn ends up adopted by Bloss and Cass in Heaven. But damn it was so satisfying to imagine that scene. All that was missing was a deep voice saying "FINISH HER!" and "FATALITY!" God! It was perfect even thought I might end up in hell for saying this. At least I hope I end up in that basement Jez was since comparing with everything else... my God.
But anyways Bubbles was OTP, one of my fave characters in this chapter if not the best one and I sincerily hope she kicks Boomer in the face for surprising her.
It was time for her to become a Momma Bear!
b. For BC! God I feel so sorry for her. I read your response and I sincerily feel bad for her. Shes so fucked up in the head after the betrayal of Rome that it pains me. And again shes a mommy. And Bane knows about the baby and told her all that shit about Old Gramps and his brothers! (Which in consideration it might be true but I believe BC and the kids can end up in Heaven one day... I hope)
Anyway, no wonder her head is a mess. I feel bad that she doesnt trust Bubbles with Emmy but... I try to understand her point of view. How everyone besides Butch is out to get her and her kids. I feel bad for her. She should get a hobby like knitting.
C. For Boomer! I feel iffy about you dingus! Im glad you learnt from Butchs mistakes but why do you still report to that cunt and still ask him if he is fine?! Let him die! The world will be a better place for Bliss and the kids, duh! I just hope he is only trying to make him trust him and then stab him in the back when Rome and Brick get there. Your pops deserves it after he treated you like gum under his shoes! Fuck up shit for him Boom! And dont you fucking dare go against your wife and Cain! Redeem yourself!
D. For Dingus! I mean Butch! (: D) Gosh! Im SO freaking happy you recognised your true emotions finally about all this shit! Now all thats left is to help BC get her mentality straight, stop the kids from doing something stupid like being soldiers for Bane and give your daughter a huge hug! Oh but I still hope you end up in Hell along with Brick, Boom, Rome and Cain. Thats their retribution towards the entire world! And I sincerily hope for a fight between uncles and nephews here! And maybe one with Old Gramps too although he most certainly will kick their asses and bite off some fingers while at it.
Omg I imagine Belial, Doggo Uncle and Hades Uncle (I will name him also Frog Uncle) tag teaming with Jude, Pluto and Ciacco... It would be a freaking disaster lol.
E. For EAT-SHIT Bane! You manipulative cunt! Im so freaking glad you felt the damage over when Brat died! And Bubbles is not a bitch! You are! Hahahaha deal with it sucker! (God I sound like such a child) And fuck off from the kids and BC! And your sons! You deserve to die for that shit!
And damn his luck its really running out! Brat died, he loses little by little control over the Ruffs, Brick and Rome are after his ass, humanity and Miss Bellum who is a badass, are after him! He might as well be butt-hurt while grasping to spider webs to keep himself afloat! Its finally coming the day ladies and gents!
Its finally coming the day when Laylah and the rest of the family get their hands of him! I hope his screams can be heard from Heaven while Cass and Bloss sip tea! Hallelujah!
F. For F in the chat for you Brat! You bitchy cunt! Ha! Hope you ended up with your sisters. Also of course Ive seen that tidbit between Berserk, Old Gramps and Jez. And it was damn satisfying while at the same I was just pitying her. To still be alive while feeling all that pain. GOD I may joke about that guy but damn I may never wish to visit him in any way. Nope.
And I feel a little bad for the kid Brat was going to have even thought they most likely would have had the same rotten personality... but I hope it ended up in Heaven.
G. For God AllMighty, Satan wtf!? Making jokes about you is not easier at all! May the power of God and all saint compel you demon!
God Dino, you made it a challenge for yourself to show the readers old gramps is actually still a freaking beast.
H. For HOLY SHIT JAYDEN! Youre my best edgy boy right now! Dont shoot yourself just for somebody like Brat! God! Thanks the heavens Bubbles was around because I seriously thought were gonna loose Jayden and so Cain would ho AWOL on Brat and Bane. It would have been exciting but it wasnt worth it. And besides the deaths of Cass and Bloss are still fresh in my mind. And I neither want to see the giant gummybear sad. So I would have respected it but I wouldnt have accepted it. Besides Emmy and Bliss need you, you dingus! Also Boxer!(I decided mentally that Jayden will be the little guys parental figure and that Boxer is such a cool name! And in my mind yes, Jayden will be a father figure. I anxiously wait the day he will be a freaking mess because of Boxer.)
I. For I love the interactions between Brick and Rome! They were so focused on getting out of Hell that they tried to never separate and always cooperate despite their bloody past! An eye for an eye and the word goes blind. But two heads think better than one. Much more if they are both smartasses. They are what former enemies should aim for, damn.
J. For Jez and Laylah! Omgosh what the heck are you doing Gramps, you piece of shit! Jez suffered enough goddamit, to put her through the same hardships as Laylah too! The nerve!
Although I wonder of who was speaking of Satan when he said the "hysterical wife". I believe he said it while speaking to Laylah. Because Jez if I remember well wasnt hysterical. At least I cant remember it. Also poor, poor Laylah. I feel bad for her but Im somewhat glad she is suffering on the inside because of her past actions. That she regrets the day when she was won over by Gramps and training so harshly Cain and Rome and not acting like a freaking functional family. She needs a hobby too.
Also, who the heck was the angel? Was her daughter that got devoured or was it Professor Utonium!? Because it would be sweet if it would been either of them reconnecting with Laylah! Or even Cass meeting her mother in law lol. But if it was Bloss... it would be kind of weird.
Althought I wonder too why Belial said that angels cant be trusted. Arent they all good and sincere? Yeah, they might be opposed forces to the demons but I believe they could set their differences aside in order to defeat Bane and free humanity of demons. If God even cares.
K. For kicking myself for forgetting about our Giant Confused Gummybear! CAIN! You are a precious marshmallow like always! Gripping Emmy like a freaking baloon and Bubbles being like yeah sure thats lovely. And OMG I FOUND SO CUTE THE GAY COUPLE! YOU HAVE THE GAY SHIELD! YOU CANT LOSE!
Dino dont you dare change destiny ok?!
Jk jk you can do whatever you want since its your story and we readers will shut up and cry if you do something too drastic to them but nothing else. Otherwise readers that flame - they deserve a visit to Old Gramps hahaha.
And also Cain nominated for best and gross uncle out there lmao. Yep, milk with blood. The perfect recipe for
Demon spawns... god.
L. For loving the big uncles even though they were such butt hurt people. And for Pluto to be so stupid and Ciacco being like... whatever lol. I just loved it all. And also Jude! The final brother we havent seen yet! I believe. But I can say if Belial was the Cinnamon Roll Uncle Jude is totally the Mr Steal your Girl Uncle. Just for the way you described him I imagined a hunk in robes and I was like: yes I might as well sin. And since also he is on the side of God he sounds like the best one to bring home to pa' out of all of them. But I still love you Cinnamon Roll, even if youre a sadistic fuck that freaking sews wings on peoples back for the worst reasons. And Doggo And Frog Uncles are just the freaks of the family.
Also Rest In Peperoni Pluto for being a fucking idiot.
M. For the morgue Jude placed them in! A star of the chapter. MISS BELLUM IS BACK TO KICK SOME DEMON ASS! Although damn Brick didnt also explain Bloss is dead lol. And it would be also fun when all three of them see how much of a mess is BC and how Bubbles almost leads a unit with a freaking tank.
N. For No! NO ! PLEASE GOD! NOOOOOO! (The Office meme and GIF) Dont you dare Blayze or Bruiser kill that innocent lady! Dont! Some other competent adult help them dammit!
O. For oh lol, Emmy is a freaking trooper munchkin in the freaking apocalypse and Bliss is a freaking timid mess! They are both so cute!
And of course the other kid of Brick and Bloss is a fighter... you could have given some of those guts to your brother... gosh. And if its up for vote I will choose Boxer since its sound so cool. I hope he ends up bossy like his mom and with the ego of his dad. Let him make Jayden suffer in the future lol.
P. I was smirking so much when you recognised you wanted Princess to be gone already.
Q. For QUEENS! Where are our dead BUT angelic queens? You make the angels look so mystical and mysterious gosh. I sincerily want to see them kick demon ass or reunite at least one more time with their hubbies. I wanted so bad a kid of Cass and Rome, god. But to Satan it would have been the same thing as Bane and Laylah dammit.
Also... Im so fucking stupid! I know who that angel was Goddamit! How can I be so stupid to forget the freaking detail that has no place in Hell goddammit! Like hmm thats nice! I didnt even stop and think! Hey whats this specific thing doing here when supposedly SOMEBODY (not saying names) else had it! But no I just read it and move on with my day! Goddammit!
Grrrrrr!
Anyway I just hope Cass ends up as an Archangel or Cherub, come down to Earth, take her gun from JD and freaking shoot people in the face in the name of the Holy Father with a smug look on her face. That would be a sight.
Wow that was a long rant.

2. Ok wo what do I expect will happen next? Heaven and Hell are much closer than before so that must mean something. And most likely something that would piss off and at the same time thrill Old Gramps.
Jez (I hope)wont give in to making a deal with Satan.
Laylah and the uncles in the last chapter will get their hands on Bane. Brick and Rome will be definetely stuck in Hell afterwards. I have a feeling all the demons that escaped will remain on Earth and humans will be like: oh, lets freaking kill them. And there will be new demon rulers. The kids will grow up to become demon hunters. Butch - although he doesnt deserve it - will try to make a family with BC. BC should demand a lawsuit, a restraining order and a machete. But I have a feeling she wont get either of those with how unstable she is. Maybe the machete to get a last cut in Banes face. I bet that would make him look as disgusting as he is inside. Maybe like that nobody will be so fucking prone on carrying his spawns of hell.
Anyway, I cant actually imagine how its gonna go down. Brick, Rome and all the other affilliations will have to be there to work. But will BC and Butch fight for Bane or not? Although BC right now is the most dangerous double edge sword for Bane now. She can easily turn against him when the situation turns against them but I have a feeling Bane will use Blayze and Bruiser as hostages and that will be the drop that topples the cup of bullshit, desperation, regret and anger of BC and Butch. I can see her attacking Bane and Butch doing the same, following her if somehow the fear for his son wins over his fear of Bane.
As for Boomer, God I goddamn hope he was just affectionate with Bane just to get away, find Bubbles and backstab Bane together with the humans. Because if he otherwise went just to make Bubbles think over her choices or to let her know what Bane wants to do and afterwards return to Bane... If that happens Cain and Bubbles might as well kick him the heck out out of his mind and leave him unconscious in the forest. Or Cain can just send him to Hell to meet Old Gramps because he could kick some sense into him. Or at least Jez.
As for Butch, Im so iffy about him. I hope he freaking backstabs Bane in a fit of sandwiched anger, fear and adrenaline. But I dont trust him to actually do it. If in the last chapter it would be like Bane is killing BC and Butch just watches powerless I would be like yep, I saw that possibillity coming. And as for the kids, mayb Emmy will push Butch and BC to do something great, I hope Bliss is like wow whats that when she sees the freaking tank, I hope for the sake of my sanity that neither Blayze nor Bruiser will kill that lady because otherwise they will definetely end up in hell, I hope that Blayze tells Bane any moment after seeing that lady to fuck off, and I wonder in the back of my mind too how Bubbles will get clean blood to add in the baby formula. Or imagine Cain how he says: Oh no, the more diseases the blood has the baby will like it more. That would be a moment for Bubbles to tell him to never approach her nephew ever again.
And Miss Bellum is just gonna rock and be next Mayor.
And everything else is up in the demonic, blood and ash infested, fumes.
And of course there is more rant. I love that FanFiction doesnt put a limit of space lol.

3. I loved this chapter for just how graphic it was. I was literraly seeing the scenes in my mind as I was reading it. Which is a really hard thing to do for a writer so congrats Dino. You excited the heck out of me. Wheeeze. But - I will have to say also that some battles, especialy with Belial and Fenrir? Whatever, Doggo Uncle were a bit tad more difficult to comprehend for my mind to make exact scenes in my head. Maybe you need a bit more work to describe really intense battles. Im just trying to be constructive here but I aready admire what have you realized until now Dino. Since its ENDGAME though I expect that both next chapter will get more and more graphic or keep with the same level of violence. Its great either way. And I can wait considering how difficult it is to write such scenes.

4. Nice to see you again after all this time Dino. And dont worry. If we had to wait an year for such a great chapter we can still wait 2 more years lol. First and foremost come your wellness and happiness. And if we dont hear from you soon Happy Hollydays!

P.S. It took me nearly a fucking day to write this freaking review. God am I such a piece of shit. But you deserve it Dino. Of course, if you love them.
P.S.S. Im doing the review on my phone. In one moment it died, and I tried to get back to the review after it charged for a minute. I open the website and the review was gone. As in all I wrote was gone. I had a mini heart attack than and there thinking I needed to rewrite everything. I had luck and the review got saved in cache and it didnt got deleted. Just a random fact.
Read you later!
Bigail chapter 31 . 11/9/2019
So glad for the update, thank you. Now only two chapters more? Will there be a next book, a continuation for this one? Where ummm you see more happy moments for the families.
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