Reviews for A Toy with Sadness
Guest chapter 8 . 6/21
Wtf? You can’t just erase years of abuse! Arthur raped Merlin several times in this! He manipulated him by harming his family! These are not conflicts that should be resolved, these are conflicts that cause years of pain... Merlin should really ditch Arthur’s ass as fast as he can...
Guest chapter 3 . 6/21
I’m kind of crying over the rape
Anon chapter 1 . 11/1/2019
I feel like this story is pretty problematic. There's nothing romantic about rape and sexual slavery. Arthur isn't a "bad boy" or "troubled," he's a rapist and does not deserve to have Merlin in his life. Merlin sympathizing with the person who sexually abused him for years isn't love, it's Stockholm Syndrome. I'm not trying to shame you or anything, and I think you're a very talented writer, I just needed to say that.
Anon chapter 1 . 10/31/2019
I haven't finished the story. I don't know the manga it's based off of, but I feel like this story and likely the manga are really problematic. In fanfiction, I think there's a line between purposely sexualizing rape for the purpose of a kink, and romanticizing it, and this story falls on the romanticizing side. There's nothing romantic about rape or sexual slavery. Forcing someone to have sex isn't the sign of a "bad boy," or someone who's "troubled," it's the sign of a rapist. Like I said, I didn't finish the story, but it really, really bothers me that Merlin ended up with the person who sexually abused and manipulated him for years. That's not love, it's Stockholm Syndrome, and Arthur absolutely does not deserve to have Merlin in his life. I'm not writing this to try to shame you or anything, and I think you're a very talented writer, but I really needed to say that.
Zeddison Forever chapter 2 . 1/1/2019
There is a manga with this plot
Crystal chapter 8 . 9/20/2017
Loved it
aewea chapter 6 . 5/28/2016
I really love this fic... I know. Many people cal me sick but this kind of relationships between them ... It's just ... I don't know... Beautiful ?
nkshamma chapter 8 . 10/31/2014
It was different but a very good story. Beautifully written!
Lady Gaidin chapter 8 . 5/31/2014
I enjoyed this fic. I love how the relationship developed. Thanks for the happy ending.
Momma Midnight chapter 8 . 5/29/2014
Love this story!
Airy89 chapter 8 . 2/15/2014
So romantic in the end
I love it
Samie TW-1D-Merlin-RotG chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
AWW that was the best way to end that. I'm not going to lie I hated Arthur for the first 6 chapters. I hated how he treated Merlin, but now I'm just happy that they have a healthier relationship
Hanryu chapter 7 . 10/26/2013
It was nice to read A Toy With Sadness with Merlin and Arthur as Shinobu and Kengo. I also enjoyed how you changed the things :3
AnimalLover411 chapter 2 . 10/2/2013
continue the story!
Eoeo chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
Awesome story, thanks for sharing!
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