This is a copy of the previous chapter.

There's more to Harry temper than what he is saying.

No offense, but Harry is turning into Voldie. I wonder if the duel with Horcrux Riddle empowered the piece in Harry taking him over? However this change is making it hard for me to read this story.

Omg petunia is adorable here. The chummy exchange was so unexpected but so needed

That’s disappointing.

Are you going to complete the story?

Love, love, love your story! Hope you update soon, thank-you for sharing.

Good story

Lily Potter was a good character to use in WBWL story. Too bad you did not deem it apt to use her. I quit in this story after the second paragraph.

James wand is 11 inches... Just sayin'
Also, the story is dripping with care bear happy lalala no conflictness. Yeah making it up as you go.
Googling words or copying them from movies doesn't mean you can use it in a sentence, at least not that AND make the conversations seem natural, it all seems so forced. No flow as to speak.
There's as I said too obvious who's good, who's bad, which character you like which ones you don't. Judging by the short introductionary text at the top, it's very missleading. This is so cut and dry you couldn't cut it with a katana. It's not complicated, and as I complained about, you try to use language you don't grasp.

I couldn't get myself to read further then this, so I recommend a huge edit, if not a rewrite.

Hope I didn't come off as too harsh (well, I don't care but I feel compelled to actually tell you that I have the best intentions when reviewing, this isn't thoughtless flame, this is critic from a person who has studied litterature and written a shitload of stuff and yeah, I know complaining on language when you aren't perticularily good at english yourself is hypocritical but as I said, it's something to work on, I know I do.

I like it

It's interesting to read.

Hello. Napakamaganda ng iyong isinulat na kuwento. At... Ugh! Sorry, I am more fluent in English rather that my own country's language, so please do forgive me for that, my fellow kababayan...XD
Kidding aside, you really are a good writer and this story is better than half of what is out here in the fanfiction world. So, don't degrade yourself by saying that this story is not quite as good as other fic's out there.

I like the chapter

just found this and read all 26 chapters lol
LOve that Harry is friends with Draco and Theo and that you are slowly increasing his friends
the part where Harry was carrying Daphnes books was a great read(harry/daphne is my favorite pairing so sue me) Your personality for Harry is a very cool addition as well as him being so close to Lars I have to say this is a really good story I hope he lets his friends eventually become animagi with him it would be interesting what draco and theo might become.

I am surprised you havnt mentioned Ginny since the bookshop tho .
talking of the bookshop your take on Mr Malfoy was very unusual but very fun to read.
For an OC Lars is interesting I like how he wants to protect the Basilisk
a question if Harry gets more Elves would they be Aramis Athos and Dartagnan?