Please update

Please come back and finish it you abandoned it right before it seems like it was going to get really good with the will reading.

Please update and finish this story

I just found this story and I love it

Loving the story. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

this is all pretty juvenile. THey all just take her in and make her part of the family...just like that. Her supposed sob story makes EVERYONE cry? Ya, bullshit.

When Edward is talking about Tanya you can tell that the story was written by a female and his pov is clearly not coming from a male. You are writing him as if he is a woman!

Just getting good...too bad it’s no t finished! Pout face!

I hope that you will continue and finish this story. It is so captivating,!

I hope you finish this story even though it has been 5 years since updated. But it is a great story so far and I would love to see it finished. Thanks you are a great writer and should continue. :-):-)

I love this story and would love to see you continue it.

I love this story! I hope you come back and finish it. I have seen some the horrendous guest reviews and comment and I am appalled! They chose to hide behind guest and said mean and hurtful things that were completely uncalled for and out of line. If they didn’t like your story, then the should have X out and read something else. And if they think they can do better, then they should go do their own thing. I sincerely hope you come back and finish it. I love mafia stories!

Boy you made Charlie out to be stupid.

Please update this story

wowo this was really great can't wait to read more of your stories