Beautiful! Amazingly beautiful!

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I totally and completely love this story. I love how you have developed the emotional side of the relationships, not just the physical stuff. A lot of fics I have found only realy cover the physical and only hint at the emotional side and I think that's even more important. I think your story is brilliant.

Not bad for this one. I'm wondering is it because you can't stretch your mind past a number of chapters, reason your stories are so short!

Brilliant!

Great job

Oh f**k off with this.

Yeah this story was slowly losing it. First scene at Hogwarts was a little over the top but not too bad. Second scene with the nice goblins was also too much, but livable. But Andy and Harry's scene simply didn't work.

I really, really love this story. This feels like a much more believable epilogue for a world weary Harry than the canon join the establishment nonsense that Rowling came up with.

Also, Harry/Andi is an unusual pairing that you did a great job of setting up & having make sense.

Good grins. Thanks!

I can't lie. My only complaint is it's wish this was longer

My favourite Harry leaves the UK fic. Brilliant!

hardly even started this fic and I'm already bored with it.

Goblins. Are. Not. A. Noble. Proud. Warrior. Race. They are dirty tricksters and thieves who hate and despise humans and have absolutely no reason to be acting like reskinned Klingons. If anything they're more like Ferengi mixed with trolls. Small, vicious, greedy and shortsighted.

I think it's pretty sad that the only way you can envision adults having a happy marriage is if the husband is a submissive slave to his wife. This went from a story about Harry and Andromeda finding love and a new reason to live in each other, to a sad and cliched story about Harry being a subservient male in a polygamous relationship. And all the within a chapter or two. That's a pretty steep nose dive.

I also take issue with how you arbitrarily decided that Shacklebolt has to be an asshole for zero reason (or real build up) just for there to be a villain in the story. And Hestia was a terrible, poorly realized character whose motivations went from just being a disloyal person "following orders" to someone who was a man-hating "feminist" who for some reason had a grudge against Harry. You know, someone who she slept with, who was friends with her alleged best friend, and the "god father" to her godson.

They two are characters that are either canonically decent or neutral people who you randomly turned into complete cunts with no real character development to support it. And there was zero reason for it, because you could have had essentially the same story with people trying to track down Harry for less nefarious reasons that he still didn't want to be involved with.

Oh, and I don't know if I read the part about Hermione's dad correctly. The way I read it implies that Ron and he ran off to begin a homosexual relationship together. If that's the case, that was fairly amusing. If not, then the writing definitely needs to be touched up.

Cool and creative.