Your writing is simply beautiful, and I think you did a perfect job encapsulating the tenderness between the two! I know it's 2020 - but please come back, LOL I'll leave a review on every single update :'(

It's so cute! I love it!

That was lovely!

Oh god, this is so tender and beautiful... I'm so speechless. Nothing was rushed... and that intimacy between them is something so precious. I really wish you would update the next chapter. Your writing is so flawless and I'm crying.

the hesitancy, the sensual nature, this is beautiful! thanks for writing this

I can't even begin to describe how poignant this fic is. Damn. It isn't too cheesy, nor too fluffy. It isn't even smutty. But the relationship between them was portrayed realistically. And personally, if I had to define love, this fic answers it very well. Nice job! Looking forward to reading your other fics. Thanks for this!

I'm late to the party, but I really loved this.

I love the premise and the set up and how not-so-subtle Roy is haha. Cant wait to see how this goes.

This was wonderful. Sensual, loving, sweet and in character. A delightful read, your writing is beautiful and it is so wonderful to see him ask for conscent and be respectful of Riza as a equal. Truly a joy to read. Thank you for writing.

It took me a while to dig through the bowels of to find a decent Royai fan fic. I must say stumbling across your piece did not disappoint. It kept so nicely in tune with their characters, and had a beautiful intimacy without being too raunchy. I thoroughly enjoyed this and am very glad to have found it :)

Lovely. Looking forward to whatever is next.

you should write professionally this is spectacular

Dammit.

I've been cockblocked again.

awwwww...that was so cuteeee X3333

cute and romantic