Nooo it’s the endhaha. I loveeee ur books. Gonna be so sad when I have read them all

What is Bunny like in the books ?

Aussie Dialect. Just google. I’m Aussie so if u ever need help let me know
But u have done a great job.

Crocodile Dundee is a great movie to watch for Aussie dialect..

Ooo so far this is gooddd poor Jack and Sandy.

I have the feeling I read this before, but I didn't, so confusing... Anyway, great story I loved all of it, even if it doesn't really have a plot. I also like some of the details of the book you put in here (I haven't read them because they are to expensive to buy (lol) and my library doesn't have them in my language, let alone in English and everything I know is thanks to fanfic) and I sympathize with Pitch maybe a little too much (and Jack, oooh, the feels). I really enjoyed reading this!

This chapter definitely wasn't boring! And the action is very logical, even though Jack may be a bit stupid to go for his staff and not keep watch of his surroundings, but hell, that would be me too

Cupcakes are always a good solution to everything! Great chapter! you can really feel the suspense and action

Amazing battle story, I personally find them the hardest to do. You even threw some thoughts about Pitch's past.
I really like your writing! Thanks for the wonderful story!

Oooooh, more hurt/comfort and Jack in danger and OOOOOO, IDEA! I need to stop getting them when I'm still working on 5 stories, 1 RP type with friend that makes it impossible o work on the other In Progress ones...ah, still adding it. Never read the books but the bits and pieces from these fics that include tidbits give me good ideas. 10/10

but failing miserably is fun!

great story. really loved it. are you thinking of writing a second part to this? i would love to know what happens next :D

oh ya are you sure English isn't your native language cause you were pretty spot on here. you wrote better than most native English fanfic writers.

I think I died while reading this. THANK YOU FOR SCARING ME TO DEATH!

Oh. My. Goodness.

Oh my goodness I love this so much.

OMG ME LOVE ME LOVE ME LOVE!

OMG!