Reviews for Revelations
Teresa chapter 17 . 3/19/2017
Please update, I love this fanfic, we need more armor here in fanfiction net.
Teresa chapter 3 . 3/19/2017
Wonderful! Reencarnation fic! Update please, i love this
Lita of Jupiter chapter 17 . 6/19/2016
Well, I am wondering whether we will get a glimpse of the accident and what happened afterwards, it would seems a very important part for us to see, how and when it happened.

And also any part that has Morgana getting her first kiss and Arthur being super jealous.
thelostgirlfoundherhome chapter 17 . 7/31/2014
I really enjoyed reading this, and I love how you've written the characters. Can see it's been awhile since you updated but if there are any more chapters to come I would definitely read them
AryaTindomiel chapter 17 . 8/2/2013
Finally! The ever curious Arthur that should have reigned in the show is here! Thank you for him not being so oblivious to his surroundings, it was really annoying to watch him not see the things that were clearly right in front of him.

Yay for some Merthur banter, I've been quite lax on that so it's good to read it from someone else. It's really nice that you have the knights included as much as possible because you know me I love having lots of characters. But you've gone slightly hypocritical yourself - whatever happened to not wanting to see Gwaine cry :p, I mean you haven't said that he does it out right but I'm sure some tears are being shed, ah well who wouldn't cry if they lost Estella. But of course we know that Gwaine'll get her back!

On the meeting. The only setback here is that everyone addresses Estella so casually (save for her father) at the beginning. I would think they would be a bit more proper since it is a formal meeting, but that's the only problem. My girl totally owned all those men!

I'm really liking this Tristan/Estella relationship you've got going here. Like a really leveled and comfortable father/daughter thing that I obviously cannot include in my own fic but it's really nice and i hope it continues to pop up in yours.

"Wonderful job, my dear. I'm sure mummy will be absolutely pleased to hear about this." - oh but of course she is her mother's daughter! Le Fays strive to have the top spot! I like how Annis is taking Estella's side as well. This really does show us a glimpse of how Estella is going to grow into the driving force she is described as in the sequel.

Well, I reviewed as best as could since i'm out of practice but i hope I gave you good feedback. You certainly gave me great chapters to read and I continue to look forward to the later ones and will always be here if you need me ;D. Keep writing when you can.
AryaTindomiel chapter 16 . 8/2/2013
My gosh, are you trying to make us feel like slowpokes. Look at that just bringing out chapter after chapter even after you sort of hiatus... but then again I am the total perfectionist so it does take me forever and eternity to write. I'm glad that i'm helpful to you :) Anyway...

oh Arthur is just a prat isn't he? But we love him anyway and Merlin is used to him by now. hehe wow now one my favorite canon trios this time and they are shopping o.o well never actually imagined that scenario before. Gosh if only Estella or Gwaine or even Percy or Leon were there, cause there would have been some commentary on Arthur's reaction to seeing Morgana in the dress.

And speaking of dresses, were these again ones you imagined because you are just so good at that, I always have to go find a dress and then describe it. I'm terrible at trying to come up with the designs in my head, so kudos twin if this is the case again.

Of course we must always include the King Arthur debate in modern fics! Oh, the irony of the characters not always realizing who they once were is always fun to read. Again it would have been interesting to have Estella here to throw in her two cents but we know she is needed somewhere else so it's all good :).
AryaTindomiel chapter 15 . 8/2/2013
Yay! We finally get to have Merlin revealed! Sort of anyway, I don't think he and Estella will be spouting out their plan to anyone who doesn't have to know will they? But now he's here and in their lives, I can't wait till you bring in the others.

Aww, Niniane sounds rather adorable! even though i always thought Estella was more a dog person, but that may just be me, since she is a Le Fay cats and really all animals in general would be associated with her and on that note:

"Familiars of the Le Fay women were intelligent creatures, bound to their mistresses with the utmost of loyalty, as Aithusa was to Morgana." - I love that you mentioned this cause there were many people who bashed Morgana for have Aithusa being loyal to Morgana just because it 'didn't make sense,' which if they knew the legends it actually does.

"It is not whether you can get them back together; it is that you must. Or would you like another trip to the Isle of Blessed? I'm sure Nimueh or my mother have some very interesting things to say to you." - you tell him Estella! It's not always about what you can and can't do, it's what you must or must not.

I love Estella and Niniane sort of ganging on Merlin. But good for you warlock finally realizing that A/G are a total mess that need to not even exist but kinda need to for things to go according to plan. I really liked the Estella/Merlin convo (I can see now why my readers sort of rave about them), Estella basically acts as the reason to his doubt and when he has to concede that she is right he wants to sort of one-up her with the dramatic exit.

Can't wait to read how all this continues... oh wait i'm doing that right now ;)
AryaTindomiel chapter 14 . 8/2/2013
Oh yea! Another chapter dedicated to the other half of the our OTPs! But oh Estwaine do they give us such grief, them and their stubbornness! But even though the road to true love is not smooth and easy we know that these two are endgame and will be stronger because of these obstacles!

Okay onto real reviewing, but I'm definitely losing my touch :/ but thanks for trying out my idea :)

I really kinda have an urge to smack Gwaine across the face but whatever he'll see that he is wrong eventually. Thanks for adding the bit of light-heartedness in the middle with one of my favorite trios! keeps the chapter from being too angsty, which you know I can't really bear too much sometimes. And you continue to do such lovely diction!

"Estella de Bois was her own woman, and she would not be bound by any man, even the man she loved." - oh yes, very true. Estella is too free-spirited to ever yet pulled down anywhere, but ya know this works to her advantage as well as everyone else's in a way...

"he would have throttled the senseless man and hang him high above the trees where possible suitors of Estella could see." - haha yea that would be a warning indeed, I always love the Arthur/Estella cousin/sibling relationship.

"her love for you is true and it always will be...Remember Gwaine, no woman will ever love you as Estella does." - Oh, Morgana, Morgana, how can I love you even more than before? i guess that's what Arthur is always thinking hehe but while the guardian is away her cousin's rising up in her place.

Even though it seems that there is quite a significant time jump between 13 and 14 you did say that these are one shots so time is not really a biggie. Anyway you never cease to amaze even while you are away for so long :) off now to review the others!
IveGottaBeMe1 chapter 17 . 7/28/2013
More, please! (But do you have to have Guinevere? Kidding, I know you do...and I want to know about Morgana and Merlin's debate on whether or not she deserved to die! I have a feeling Morgana voted yes on that, and I agree...)
Guest chapter 17 . 7/25/2013
I freaking love your story!
Pegasus chapter 16 . 7/18/2013
This chapter was great, loved their interaction, fun and simple. I loved the part where Morgana was trying on the dresses and Athur and Merlin's reaction. Hope to read the next chapter soon. :)
Pegasus chapter 15 . 7/18/2013
Sorry for not reviewing earlier, but now that I have the time I will do so. Well as usual a very good chapter, I like that for the very first time we get to see Merlin actually "came out" and talk to Estella of what he has to do to get Arthur and Morgana together. I love the interaction with Merlin and Estella because it seem hostile but at the same time friendly. And I would love for things to get solved between Gwaine and Estella
Pegasus chapter 14 . 7/12/2013
Hey I thought that we lost you, because you hadn't updated in ages, any way let me tell you once again chapter was done beautifully, I love that this chapter was a focus on Estalla and Gwaine, but it made me sad at the same time because it seems that there is always something in there way, hope this change and we see Stella happy. I be waiting patiently for the next chapter. P.S. I used to be anonymous but I chose this name because it might be confusing for you. :)
Guest chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
I read this small little detail and as an European History student it made me just a little mad. King Henry VIII ruled England long after the Pendragons. The Arthurian legends were talked about while his father and himself were in power. Camelot was before him, not after. Other than that it was really good.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/30/2013
As usual I love this chapter, I truly enjoy your descriptive writing of the surroundings, specially when you describe nature, I can imagine myself there. Also really interesting how you introduced Sophia, how Morgana was elegant and well composed in her responds. I really enjoyed the humor of Morgana throwing Sophia into the water. Can't wait to read what's next, please update as soon as you can. :)
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