Oh wow. Not gonna lie, this literally made me tear up! Just this little bit shows you have a talent for writing Jade’s pov. Please keep it up. :)

So cool

This is amazing! I like when it dawns on Jade that she has been taking more than giving in this friendship.

Sometimes it's as simple as someone saying "I'm here" to calm you down.

Cute!

Well I can say that Jade is lucky to have Tori in her life, that's for sure!

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Legendary Story

That was so good I hope you put the sequel up soon

Very nice. If you do turn this into a multi-chap story, let me know or mention it in 'Fantasy', and I'll look for it. You bring up a good point. Tori has been there for Jade at almost every thing that has happened to Jade since Tori got there. I look forward to seeing more of this if you go on with it, and I will continue to read and review 'Fantasy'.

This is really sweet. I like how it goes deep into Jade's mind. Great job.

Oh, this is beautiful! Really. Loved the fact that you wrote main of the mean things that Jade made with/for Tori, it made their relation sounds even more deep. Congrats! xx

This was sad & sweet. Thank you.