Quisiera una secuela, la meresco por las lagrimas que me hiciste derramar. Me encanto aunque hubieron partes muy tristes.

Yo me puse a llorar por el pobre Marcus

N is so perfectly in character. I love it!

Even though this made me really sad, I seriously love it! I know it's been a long time since you finished it, but I hope you consider writing a sequel

Omg. I read this the whole night and forgot to sleep. Now I'm wide awake. I was not prepared that this story was sad. Should have been categorized as angst and feels! My heart could not take soo much angst. Argh. Not happy with the ending. Need an alternate happy ending with N and White are back together. Sop much tears were shred. Thank you for this amazing story. But not so much for the sleepless night I have to endure for the rest of the day.

Love the story, cry a lot with the final chapters, god seriously love the story

why did this make me cry so hard

marcus. did. not. die. ASDFGHJKL one million pokedollar fine.

i still refuse to believe that Marcus died. hmph.

:c marcus...died *cries*

I was listening to Starts With One by Shiny Toy Guns and It fir perfectly!

Isaac the Oshawott gave N what he deserved.

This will be good.

Awesome fanfic!

The only downside to this fanfic is the amount of swearing, which it could very much do without. It feels *very* out of place in the Pokemon universe and like most swearing in fanfics, sounds like it's just there to swear and make the character sound like a total hardass. But that's a criticism I harbour towards most fanfictions set in universes that have minimal to no swearing in them at all. I've also never been a fan of using the resident god-character's name where most people would say "God", such as "Oh, God" or "Oh my God", unless this is done in-universe (such as Harry Potter using "Merlin" sometimes). In the case of Pokemon it's Mew or Arceus if not both. Again, those are general complaints I have with fanfiction that I see here in this one. I mean I swear, so it's not like swearing offends me, it just doesn't feel like it belongs in some universes, and I don't think it's *ever* needed as frequently as Touko swears, but that's just me. Touko's just a blank slate character, and this interpretation makes her your character, so I shouldn't complain much.

I'm absolutely loving the rest, though. The relationships between Touko and her Pokemon, between Touko and N, between Touko and her two best friends... The writing itself is enjoyable, apart from the aforementioned nitpicks, which is to say most of the time.