Wow.. That was really good :) I've never even considered trying to imagine Kili with a family already! What a scene. It was so sweet, the reunion with his wife. It's weird. I've never thought of Kili without Fili. Great job!

I absolutely love it! Will you continue with it?

Gaw, you made me cry girl. Thank you for this beautiful story.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful! I LOVE this story, and also the original one! They both made me tear up! You are an incredibly gifted storyteller! Don't stop now!

Oh my god i'm fighting happy tears. So cute!