by the way its Senpai not Sempai

the damn memory loss is idiotic

Porfa revise y continua este fic es uno de los pocos de canpione y siro sin mensiomar q esta hermoso

Holy fuck this is dragging, like seriously dragging too long. There are so many unnecessary dialogue for the sake of being there that its just cringy.

I don't like NTR but its to the extend that I just want this end even if the Perseus won, even though I am rooting for Shirou. Wtf is wrong with you. Might as well make 100 chapter just explaining 1 minute of Shirou taking a step.

Awww. It sucks your redoing this but hey its your work. Do what you will with it. Thought I think it'll be hard to redo the fight between shirou and perseus. That shit was epic.

by the way its Senpai not Sempai

heroic spirits are/have pseudo goodhood

the damn memory loss is idiotic

rin and sakura are sisters

hope that he can make the divine weapons like Excalibur and Ea when hes become campione

and shirou/archer can shoot the blades faster than bullets fly

normally shirou cant make Excalibur if he does it would kill him in the process or the sword would be way weaker than the 20%)

What the Huck happened to Avalon and Excalibur. Avalon should have healed him and if he used different swords or just Excalibur home it would have been over that's the only thing and reason why I don't like this and can't continue reading it. Sorry but I think all that fighting was useless when he could have Excalibur his ass

damn it the ending authors note made me laugh so hard i cried gar indeed

i am confuse isn't star a anet or sun